Question

假设你叫李华，现在英国曼彻斯特大学留学，受到邀请，你准备参加“东方文化俱乐部”举办的用英语讲故事活动，让世界了解中国文化。你故事的内容是“凿壁偷光”。内容包括:

1. 概述故事的含义;

2. 谈谈个人感想.

注意:

1. 可适当发挥，使文章内容充实，行文连贯；

2. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

参考词汇:凿壁:make a hole in the wall

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Answer

There is always a picture in my mind. A boy, who is in worn clothes, sat at a wooden table with a pile of books on it. A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.

This is a well-known story from an ancient Chinese idiom. The boy, being poor, couldn’t afford even a candle, so he made a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor’s house to read at night. The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

Of course, things are totally different today. It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.

【解析】

本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写“凿壁偷光”的故事。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一个故事：假设你叫李华，现在英国曼彻斯特大学留学，受到邀请，你准备参加“东方文化俱乐部”举办的用英语讲故事活动，让世界了解中国文化。你故事的内容是“凿壁偷光”。内容包括:1. 概述故事的含义;2. 谈谈个人感想。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；make a hole in the wall（凿壁），well-known（众所周知的），idiom（成语），afford（买得起），candle（蜡烛），steal（偷），discouraged（气馁的），moral（寓意）及reflect（反映）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。

本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。