Question

    Max works as a security guard at a famous museum． As a security guard， Max watches visitors to the museum as they come and go． He often wonders things about them． Where do they come from？ Are they happily married？ What do they do for a living？

One day， Max notices a very pretty woman visiting the exhibit he is guarding． He has seen her before． In fact， she often comes to see the rare jewelry exhibit - sometimes several times a week．

During one of these visits， she starts a conversation with Max． She asks if it is difficult to be a security guard and if he ever gets bored． She introduces herself as Maria， a fashion designer．

When Maria comes to visit， she often talks with Max． "Maybe she likes me，" he thinks．

Max thinks she is very interesting and wants to spend more time with her． During one of their talks at the museum， he finds out that she is studying Italian．

He lies and tells her he has always wanted to learn Italian． He is simply using Italian as a trick． And it works! Max and Maria meet every Saturday afternoon in the museum garden to study Italian．

During the lessons， they also talk about themselves． Maria shares her dreams of one day showing her fashions in a museum． Max tells her many details about his security job， including the security code and the locations of alarms． He jokes that it would be very easy to rob the museum．

Over the passing weeks， they learn more about each other． What Max doesn't learn， however， is that Maria is not as innocent as she looks． Maria is actually an international jewel thief! Police from eight different countries have been searching for her in the past two years!

Her latest goal is to steal the rare Black Diamond! This diamond is the most valuable diamond in the world and it is part of the exhibit that Max is guarding． All her attention on him was a trick to learn more about the museum's security system．

注意：1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2． 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4． 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．

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One night after the museum closes， Maria appears at the gate of the museum．

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As she holds the diamond in her hands， the lights in the museum go on．

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Answer

One night after the museum closes, Maria appears at the gate of the museum. She enters the building quietly using the security code that Max shared with her. "When dealing with a beautiful woman, men can be so stupid，" she laughs to herself. She sneaks into the jewelry exhibit and destroys the alarms. Then she walks up to the glass case protecting the Black Diamond and unlocks it with the key she stole from Max． She laughs， "The Black Diamond is mine!"

As she holds the diamond in her hands， the lights in the museum go on． Then an alarm sounds and a team of police run in． They have caught her! As a police officer handcuffs Maria， the lead police investigator comes into the room． Her surprise is so strong that she is unable to speak． It is Max． She yells， "How could I have been fooled by you， a simple police detective？!" Max puts his badge back in his pocket and says， "You can think about that in prison， and by the way， I speak perfect Italian．"

【解析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写。

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