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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Saturday, I visit my elder sister, who has a four-year-old daughter, Lisa. I was about to tell me niece the story “Snow White” while my sister stopped me immediately and gave me another storybook. When I asked her if she had told Lisa the story, she shook her head and said, “I don’t think girl today should listen to this story.” I was confusing. Later, she explained why. In the story, Snow White does nothing to rescue herself. Instead, she depends others’ help. My sister doesn’t want her daughter to be a person which likes turning to others for help. She is wants Lisa to learn to be brave and independence. That’s how my sister doesn’t want to tell her such stories as “Snow White”.

 

visit→visited me→my while→when girl→girls confusing→confused depend后加on which→who/that 去掉is independence→independent how→why 【解析】 本文属于记叙文,讲述作者去姐姐家,准备给侄女讲白雪公主的故事,但是被阻止了并被告知阻止的原因。 第一处:考查动词时态。根据Last Sunday,句子的谓语应用一般过去时态,故把visit改为visited。 第二处:考查物主代词。根据文章可知,“我(的)侄女”,故用形容词性的物主代词修饰名词,故把me改为my。 第三处:考查时间状语从句。本句为结构be about to do sth. When正要做某事的时候突然,故把while改为when。 第四处:考查名词复数。分析句子可知,本句描述作者姐姐的观点,girl为可数名词,指代这类人,故用复数形式,故把girl改为girls。 第五处:考查形容词。分析句子可知,本句描述作者的感受,因此感到疑惑,故把confusing改为confused。 第六处:考查介词。本句为depned的搭配depend on sth依靠某事,故在depend后加on。 第七处:考查定语从句。which likes turning to others for help为限制性定语从句修饰先行词person,先行词为人,关系代词用who或者that,故把which改为who或者that。 第八处:考查谓语动词。分析句子可知,wants为谓语动词形式,is多余了,故去掉is。 第九处:考查形容词,分析句子可知,brave和independence都是作be的表语,故须用形容词,故把independence改为independent。 第十处:考查表语从句。根据上下文,应表达“这是姐姐不想告诉她像《白雪公主》这样故事的原因”。故用why,故把how改为why。  
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C. Whether the pet is lovely or not.

D. Whether the pet is active or not.

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