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Last Monday, it hit me that my beloved grandmother birthday was around the corner. I decided to make her an unique present. Without the slightest hesitation, I threw me into creating this priceless album. I turned on the computer, carefully selected some photos, added up some decorations, and designed each pages carefully. Eventually, an album of love born. Looked at my work with satisfaction, I couldn’t help imagining how delightedly my grandma would be.
Soon, the big day arrived. At the birthday party, I presented the album to Grandma. The moment she saw the special gift, she hugs me affectionately, tears rolling in her eyes, what made my parents smile genuinely as well.
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When I was in the middle school, I founded a student club1. (name) “green planet” inspired by Chai Jing’s documentary Under the Dome. At first people knew this club. As a result, we had only 15 members. And I 2. (laugh) at for being crazy. However, I didn’t lose heart and I insisted. Every day, we club y members broadcast weather reports and PM 2.5 levels. We then published articles and pictures of the serious 3. (pollute) of the city on the school website. Meanwhile, my club also shares suggestions 4. how to live a low carbon life on the school board, for example: take public transportation or car pool to school; do 5. (little) shopping and so on.
6. time went by, more are what students showed great interest in our club. And luckily, I persuaded my headmaster to join us. After what seemed ages of waiting, the club was finally accepted by the majority of students in my school. An increasing number of students supported 7. (ours).
Since then, we’re worked together 8. (promote) our club. And up to now, 85% of the students 9. (join) us and enjoyed the simple but eco-friendly life.
Such is Joy, 10. responsible and persistent girl.
It started on a Friday ______ when the 5-year-old and his older brother were playing ______their home near the resort town of Aspen, Colorado. Hearing the sound of ______, the mother raced to her front yard to find a ______ sight: A mountain lion was bent over her 5-year-old son, biting him. The poor boy was completely under the cat and was ______ to get free.
So the mother ______ she charged the animal, pulled away one of its ______ suddenly with a lot of force and discovered her son’s whole head was in its mouth. She didn’t back down. The mother ______ the lion’s mouth and got it open,______ the boy. She then quickly picked him up and ran away.
The boy’s father had just returned from a run when the ______ occurred. He ______ into the car with his wife and son and called 911 shortly before 8 p.m. As they ______ to a hospital in Aspen. The boy suffered cuts to his ______, face and neck. The mother ______ bite marks on her hand and scratches on her leg. Aspen valley Hospital reported that the child was not seriously injured and in ______ condition and has since been ______ to children’s Hospital in Denver for his recovery.
The mountain lion was estimated to be about 2 years old and was not fully grown. It was, perhaps, forced out to hunt on its own. Young lions may be keen on easy ______, like pets and small children.______ , it wasn’t a big cat. Had it been a 110-pound lion- which was once seen around there - this would have been a much ______ story.
The mother, who had to physically remove the lion’s paws from her son’s face, is credited with ______ his life. She’s a real hero.
1.A. morning B. afternoon C. evening D. noon
2.A. inside B. outside C. towards D. under
3.A. screams B. laughter C. applause D. cheers
4.A. surprising B. magical. C. moving D. terrifying
5.A. running B. waiting C. struggling D. walking
6.A. sprang into action B. burst into tears C. thought twice D. pulled out
7.A. eyes B. paws C. ears D. teeth
8.A. grabbed B. covered C. beat D. kissed
9.A. comforting B. scolding C. stopping D. freeing
10.A. error B. attack C. headache. D. comedy
11.A. crashed B. looked C. jogged D. jumped
12.A. sped B. swam C. dived. D. got
13.A. legs B. feet C. head D. bottom
14.A. suffered B. carved C. drew D. removed’
15.A. terrible B. fair C. bad D. poor
16.A. carried B. advised C. sold D. transferred
17.A. plants B. toys C. targets D. animals
18.A. unluckily B. generally C. eventually D. fortunately
19.A. beautiful B. happier C. different D. authentic
20.A. wasting B. saving C. ending D. risking
12 months ago, we tested most of the drone (无人机) models on the market. Typically models under $100 were very difficult to control even in light wind. 1. However in the last few months, a cheap drone model called the DroneX pro has been receiving a lot of praise among experts.
Why is this extremely high quality drone so cheap?
The DroneX Pro was designed by two engineers and drone lovers. They did lots of research and came to a shocking conclusion. The high-quality technology in most expensive brand drones comes mostly from the SAME supplier companies and was quite inexpensive. In other words? 2. it’s because the cost of advertising the brand name itself is very high.
3.
Intelligent flight modes enable the drone to land safely and make 3D spins & other cool flips.
The high-quality hidden 3-axis gimbal (三轴万向节)is able to stabilize the camera even at high speed for sharp images and jitter-free video. Even with wind, the videos are razor-sharp in real-time transmission from your environment -like a HD live stream.
The wide-angle lens provides 100mbps ultra-HD images for wonderful and crystal clear images.
When folded up, the drone is barely larger than a fist. It fits in every belt bag and in every backpack! You do not need a film crew when flying the DroneX Pro.
Why is this drone so popular?
This drone costs only a small part of the price of professional brand drones. It comes in a sleek and compact design and can be taken anywhere. It is also quiet in the air and has an improved flight time.
4. Flying feels very natural. Even a first time drone flyer can learn to use it in a matter of minutes. It is unbelievable how easy to fly the drone is thanks to its included controller.
Our conclusion
This brilliant new drone is taking the world by storm. 5.
e the best el ling gift in2019.
A. This cheap drone might be the best selling gift in 2019.
B. Their camera also struggles to deliver high-quality photos and videos.
C. Is this inexpensive drone really as good as the experts are saying?
D. What makes the DroneX Pro so special?
E. That means they’re able o offer a world class quality drone at an incredibly low price.
F. The reason why brand name drones are so expensive isn’t because of their technology.
G. This drone makes beginners look like professionals.
In my memory, winters always used to be really unpleasant. You had to bundle up just to keep warm when you went outside. You were often cold, wet, slip on the ice, and you’d arrive home to an ice-cold house. And that would mean turning on the heating and waiting. It’s a miracle you didn’t get cold to the bone.
Fortunately, things don’t have to be so challenging any more. Technology, engine ring and design have advanced giving us new solutions to old problems. It means dealing with winter needn’t be like skating on thin ice.
With a smart thermostat (温度自动调节器), our homes can be warm when we need them to be. Many models feature smartphone apps that allow you to control temperature remotely, so we can warm up the house before we arrive home. According to techradar.com, Tado’s model features voice control, while the Nest ‘leans’ your habits and automatically heats the home for you.
Clothes have been given an upgrade, too. Electronic thermal jackets, sweaters and coats heat up when you turn them on. What better way to keep warm in the dead of winter? At the touch of a button, or through an app on our phones, the clothing generates heat from elements placed inside. Many models offer three levels of heating which stay warm for over 12 hours. .
Finally, there is the clothing for the head, beanie s and Earmuff, that feature speakers included in the fabric using Bluetooth technology so we can listen to our favourite music or, in some cases, have a phone callusing the in-built microphone. All while keeping the head warm and avoiding a cold.
For many, the thought of winter used to be enough to make their blood run cold. But using technology, life needn’t freeze up. With the right solutions, there’s no reason why winter can’t be really, really cool.
1.What do the underlined words “bundle up” mean in Para.1?
A. Fix an air conditioner. B. Take a hot bath.
C. Run a lot. D. Put on more clothes.
2.How does electronic thermal clothing work?
A. The equipment placed inside the clothing produces heat.
B. It needs to be warned up before being used.
C. The thermostat heat up automatically when the temperature is low.
D. It keeps warm for over 12 hours after being charged fox an hour.
3.From the passage, we can lean the following statements EXCEPT that ________.
A. Tado’s model can be controlled by saying something to it.
B. with the in-built speaker and microphone, Beanies and Earmuffs users can have a phone call.
C. technology can do nothing to make winter less rough.
D. Bluetooth technology is used in the clothing for the head.
4.What’s the best title of this passage?
A. A Smart Thermostat B. A Modern winter
C. Ways of keeping warm D. An unpleasant winter
What’s the point of studying? It’s something you might ask yourself if you’re studying for a degree and you’re struggling to complete homework or in an exam, especially if your friends seem to be out having a good time, or are working and earning lots of money.
Many of us choose to go to university as a first step towards a good career but sometimes that career is to go to university as a first step towards a good career but sometimes that career is hard to achieve and graduates end up doing something they are overqualified for. With the increasing costs of university, students begin to ask themselves whether a degree path is the best route into a career, There is a need for much better career advice and guidance into employment in addition to university education.
But other new research says that a degree will in the long run, earn you more. However there are differences in your earning potential. Dr Jack Britton says that “graduates of the 24 Russell Group universities earn an average of £33,500 after five years - about 40% more than those who studied at other universities.”
However, it has found it’s not just the location but other factors that can play a part in what you can earn, such as the subject a student chooses to study. It discovered that five years after graduation, the income gap between students who studied the subjects that attract the highest and lowest salaries can be considerable. Graduates in subjects such as law, medicine, dentistry as well, tend to do well. And as they progress, the pay gap between these careers and others, such as the creative arts, widens. There are factors too that influence what you might earn: Five years after graduation, men earn on average 14% more than women. Also, a student’s social background can have an effect, with those from better-off household much more likely to go to university and particularly a good one.
But if you still feel university doesn’t deliver the best opportunities then there are encouraging words from Alistair Jarvis, head of universities UK, who told BBC News that “Employs are demanding more graduates and graduates are half as likely to be unemployed as likely to be unemployed as non-graduates. There are many good graduate outcomes coming from universities” So may all that studying is worth it-after all ‘no pain, no gain’!
1.Why do students start to question whether to go to university or not?
A. Because of the heavy studying burden.
B. Because they can’t get a degree after graduation.
C. Because they don’t need a degree for their career.
D. Because of the increasing costs of university.
2.Which major may most probably lead to a lower-earning career?
A. Medicine. B. Law.
C. Creative arts. D. Dentistry.
3.Which of the following is most likely to be fired according to Alistair Jarvis?
A. Graduates. B. Non-graduates.
C. Doctors. D. Employers.
4.What can be inferred from this passage?
A. Russell Group universities are top ones.
B. Most students go to university to get a good career.
C. One’s location has no effect on his income.
D. Graduates often have more academic qualifications than required for a particular job.
