Question

假设你是北京市某中学的学生李华，请根据以下提示，针对北京市遭沙尘暴袭击的情况，向某英语报社写一封信，呼吁大家植树造林，保护环境。

1. 过去家乡树木成林：如今人们毁林种地建房；

2. 气候变化，土地沙漠化；

3. 植树造林，人人有责。

注意：1. 词数100左右：开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好。

Dear Editor,

I’m a student at a middle school of Beijing.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Editor,

I’m a student at a middle school of Beijing. I’m writing to express my great concern for the environment in my hometown. My hometown used to be a beautiful place. Thick forests and green grass could be seen everywhere. However, in order to build houses and grow more crops, people there cut down many trees. As time went by, the forests were seriously destroyed. Besides, because of climate changes it rains little now. As a result, sandstorms occur frequently, from which people suffer a lot. To prevent the process of desertification, I hope all the people can take good care of the forests and plant more trees. Then our living conditions will be improved little by little.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封倡导信。

根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封倡导信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①过去家乡树木成林：如今人们毁林种地建房；②气候变化，土地沙漠化；③呼吁大家植树造林，保护环境；④植树造林，人人有责。

第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：thick forests and green grass（青山绿水），climate change（气候变化），desertification（沙漠化），take good care of（照顾）等。

第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。