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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:

1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One Saturday morning, I was watching TV with my parents when a piece of news caught our attentions. The Guangming Park called on people adopt trees. That's exact what we had been thinking about. So on the next morning, we went to the park directly. A worker there gave us a detailed introduction or showed us to the pine woods. We choose a beautiful pine tree and the worker tied a adoption card to it. When my name was seeing on the card, I was so proud and felt a sense of responsibility at the same time. To memorize the excited moment, we took photos with our new family memberthe pine tree. In one of the photos, we both smiled from the bottom of our hearts.

 

【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要叙写作者一家到公园认养树木的经过。 第一处:考查名词。名词attention为不可数名词,故不可用复数形式。句意:一个星期六的早晨,我和父母正在看电视,突然一条新闻引起了我们的注意。故将attentions改为attention。 第二处:考查短语。call on sb to do sth号召某人做某事。句意:光明公园号召人们认养树木。故在adopt前加to。 第三处:考查副词。这里用副词形式,修饰后面从句。句意:这正是我们一直在想的。故将exact改为exactly。 第四处:考查介词。当时间名词被this,that, last, next修饰时,不用介词。句意:所以第二天早上,我们直接去了公园。故将on去掉。 第五处:考查连词。这里前后动作之间为并列关系,故用连词and。句意:那里的一位工人给我们作了详细的介绍,并带我们参观了松树林。故将or改为and。 第六处:考查时态。根据全文可知,用一般过去时。句意:我们选了一棵漂亮的松树,工人就给它系上一张收养卡。故将choose改为chose。 第七处:考查冠词。名词adoption为元音音素开头,故前用冠词an。句意:我们选了一棵漂亮的松树,工人就给它系上一张收养卡。故将a改为an。 第八处:考查语态。名词my name与动词see之间为被动关系,故用过去分词形式。句意:当我的名字出现在卡片上时,我感到非常自豪,同时也感到了一种责任感。故将seeing改为seen。 第九处:考查形容词。这里修饰物moment,故前用形容词exciting,表示“令人激动的”。句意:为了纪念这个激动人心的时刻,我们和我们的新家庭成员——松树合影留念。故将excited改为exciting。 第十处:考查代词。三人以上用代词all,而both指两人。此处指作者和父母,句意:在其中一张照片中,我们都发自内心地笑了。故将both改为all。  
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4.A. wandered B. stepped C. slid D. jogged

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B. What can you control about healthy aging?

C. Physical activity keeps your body strong, and it helps with how you feel.

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C. They maybe collected the shellfish. D. They maybe drank warm water.

2.What is the connection between the rate of poisonous acid and water temperatures?

A. When atmosphere has changed, it warms off the coast.

B. When circulation comes, the oceans get warmer.

C. When climate has changed, the oceans get colder.

D. When water becomes warmer, high poisonous acid appears.

3.What result will poisonous acid cause to humans?

A. Making humans conscious. B. Making humans dead.

C. Making humans temporarily lose memory. D. Making humans suffer heart attack.

4.What's the best title of this passage?

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B. He had wanted to be a hermit.

C. He wasn't insensible of the mean usage of the "V" sign.

D. He wanted to show congratulations to British troops.

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B. The "V" sign meaning peace was invented by a Belgian.

C. Thatcher made the same error as Churchill after her successful election.

D. American antiwar protestors used the sign to greet among freedom lovers.

4.What can we conclude from the passage?

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D. Try to know culture diversity fully and regionally.

 

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