Question

假定你是李华，你的朋友Lily因为节食减肥而生病，请根据下列要点用英语给她写一封邮件鼓励她加强锻炼, 早日恢复健康。

要点：1. 坚持健康均衡的饮食；

2. 养成良好的生活习惯：定期锻炼，保证睡眠等；

3. 保持愉快的心情。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当发挥，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Lily,

I’m sorry to hear that

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Lily,

I am sorry to hear that you are ill as a result of going on a diet. You shouldn’t have eaten so little food. In fact, you’d better do more sports and build up your body. I am writing to tell you what you should do to recover you health.

Above all, you should have a wholesome diet by eating more vegetables and fruit because they are rich in vitamins and fibre. Eat less cheese and chocolate which contains much sugar and fat which will make you fat. In addition, you should exercise regularly and have enough sleep. Don’t be too tired. What’s more, keeping happy and a balanced diet is as important as sports.

I look forward to seeing a healthy Lily soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你的朋友Lily因为节食减肥而生病，请根据下列要点用英语给她写一封邮件鼓励她加强锻炼, 早日恢复健康。要点：1. 坚持健康均衡的饮食；2. 养成良好的生活习惯：定期锻炼，保证睡眠等；3. 保持愉快的心情。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：as a result of（由于），shouldn’t have done（本不该做某事却做了），build up your body（塑形），have a wholesome diet（有健全的饮食习惯），be rich in（富含）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。