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假如英语课上老师要求同臬之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺问处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的同用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的同。

注意:1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

This morning our school organized us students to paying a study visit.

We rode the bus at the school gate then got off at City Revolutionary Memorial at 7 50. There we listen to stories about revolutionaries and presented flowers. At 9: 30 we arrived at the home for the old, and played music for them happy. Then everyone chatted with elderly peoples, bringing them joy. Later we reached at our city’s special education school, which we saw deaf and blind students taught in different methods. We gave their gifts donated by our class. Also we played games with them,hoped we could do more.

At 11:30 we returned to our school. What a impressive experience!

 

paying →pay gate后面加上and listen →listened happy →happily peoples →people 去掉at which →where their →them hoped →hoping a →an 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲了今天上午,作者学校组织学生去参观学习,大家参加了各种有意义的活动。 第一处:考查固定句型。句意:今天上午我们学校组织我们学生去参观学习。organize sb. to to sth.组织某人做某事,该句型是固定句型,所以paying 改成pay。 第二处:考查连词。句意:我们在校门口坐公共汽车,然后7:50在城市革命纪念碑下车。这两个句子是并列句,需要用连词and,所以gate后面加上and。 第三处:考查时态。我们在那里听革命者的故事,送花。描述发生在过去的事情,用一般过去时,所以listen 改成listened。 第四处:考查副词。句意:9: 30,我们到达了养老院,快乐地为他们演奏音乐。修饰动词played,用副词,所以happy改成happily。 第五处:考查名词。句意:然后,每个人都和老人聊天,给他们带来了快乐。people是集合名词,本身是复数意义,所以peoples 改成people。 第六处:考查动词。句意:后来,我们到了我们城市的特殊教育学校,在那里,我们看到聋哑学生被用不同的方法教。reach是及物动词,后面直接接宾语,所以去掉at。 第七处:考查定语从句。这里含有一个定语从句,先行词是our city’s special education school,关系词在从句中作地点状语,所以which 改成where。 第八处:考查宾格。句意:我们给了他们我们班捐赠的礼物。作gave的宾语,用宾格,所以their改成them。 第九处:考查非谓语动词。hope的逻辑主语是we,它们之间是主动关系,用现在分词作状语,所以hoped改成hoping。 第十处:考查冠词。句意:多么难忘的一次经历啊! 泛指“一次经历”,impressive的首字母发音是元音,所以a 改成an。  
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