Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

As is known to all , China is the home to tea, from that tea has been spread all over the world . With a history of four or five thousand year, tea culture has been a important part of Chinese culture . Whenever guests visit , it is a custom to make and serve tea with them.

Drinking tea had a lot of advantages , one of that helps refresh yourself and improve your thinking ability . Besides , drinking tea every day is said to help you keep health and live longer .What’s more , some kinds of tea can even help people lose weight and became more beautiful , appeals to a lot of ladies.

Answer

1.去掉home前的the

2.that→where

3.year →years

4.a→an

5.tea后的 with→to

6.had→has

7.that→which

8.health→healthy

9.became→become

10.appeals前加which

【解析】

这是一篇说明文。中国茶文化有四五千年的历史，是中国文化的重要组成部分。以及喝茶的好处。

1.考查固定用法。短语be home to “为……的所在地；是……的家乡”中间不需要添加冠词，故去掉the。

2.考查连接词。句意：众所周知，中国是茶的故乡，茶从中国传到世界各地。本句为定语从句修饰先行词China且先行词在从句中做地点状语，故that改为where。

3.考查名词的数。year为可数名词，由five thousand修饰应用复数形式，故year改为years。

4.考查冠词。important为元音音素开头的单词，因此应使用不定冠词an，故a改为an。

5.考查介词。短语serve sth. to sb.“为某人奉上某物；用某物招待某人”，故with改为to。

6.考查动词时态。句意：喝茶有许多好处。本句为描述客观事实应用一般现在时，故had改为has。

7.考查定语从句连接词。本句为定语从句修饰先行词Drinking tea，指物，且做介词of的宾语，故that改为which。

8.考查形容词。keep为系动词后跟形容词作表语，故health改为healthy。

9.考查动词时态。根据上文并列谓语lose weight and可知此处应用动词原形，故became改为become。

10.考查非限定性定语从句。句意：有些茶甚至可以帮助人们减肥，变得更漂亮，这吸引了很多女士。本句为非限定定语从句修饰上文整个句子，故appeals前加which。