假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线\划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处多者从第11处起不计分。
Now I want to share some tips on my learning English to you. What really help me is watching English TV programs and film. They don’t have to be anything really difficult. I would like to suggest that you can start with a children’s show you had already seen. On the one hand, you know what is happening. You can concentrate on writing down useful words and phrases or repeating that is said. On other hand, you can hear English speak in a more natural way. In my opinion, I will learn much faster but benefit a lot more if you do so.
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（1个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。
I had a wonderful school time, thanks to my Chinese teacher, who inspired me to do great things .
When I could say my first word, I 1. (attract) by words and books. It was my Chinese teacher who grew my love of reading and influenced me a lot. With her encouragement, I would spend hours2. ( bury) myself in novels, even if my friends just laughed at me. She encouraged us to read: not just in class, 3.also on our own. The main reason why I like her so much is 4. she is one of the kindest teachers I have ever had. Whatever story you want 5. (share), she would always listen 6. (careful) and treat you like a friend rather than a student. The way she wanted us to succeed, the way she expected so much from us… It was obvious that she cared about our dreams and futures. 7. (she) personality just shows sunshine and warmth. A teacher who cares that much deserves a special place in 8. hearts of her students.
Therefore, to sum it up, my Chinese teacher is possibly one of the most inspiring 9. (educator) I’ve ever had .Her considerate ways and heartfelt pride towards her students make me feel warm. A good teacher is the one who explains, a better teacher demonstrates, but only the 10. (good) can truly inspire.
A long time ago there was a boy. He was smart, talented and handsome. _________, he was very selfish and his temper was so _________ that nobody wanted to be friends with him. Often he got angry and said various_________ things to people around him.
The boy's parents were very __________about his bad temper. They considered what they could do and one day the father had an idea. He called his son and gave him a hammer and a bag of_________.The father said: “Every time you get angry, take a nail and _________ it into that old fence as hard as you can.”
The fence was very_________and the hammer was heavy, nevertheless the boy was so angry that during the very first day he drove 37 nails.
Day after day, week after week, the number of nails was gradually_________. After some time, the boy started to understand that _________his temper is easier than driving nails into the fence.
One day the boy didn't __________hammer and nails any more as he learned to hold his temper perfectly. So he came to his father and told about his_________. “Now every time, when you hold your temper all day long,_________one nail,”his father said.
Much time has passed. At last the boy could be_________ of himself as all the nails were gone. When he came to his father and told about this, he_________to come and take a careful look at the fence. “You did a good job, my son,_________ pay your attention to the __________ that were left from the nails. The fence will _________ be the same. The same happens when you say hurtful things to people, as your words leave__________in their hearts like those holes in the fence. Remember, we need to _________everyone with love and respect. It is meaningless to say you are sorry, because the scars you leave will not _________.
1.A. Therefore B. However C. Besides D. Instead
2.A. violent B. generous C. gentle D. harmful
3.A. exhausting B. genuine C. hurtful D. terrifying
4.A. patient B. curious C. pleased D. concerned
5.A. coins B. seeds C. nails D. stones
6.A. drive B. place C. throw D. wipe
7.A. soft B. hard C. loose D. strong
8.A. decreasing B. increasing C. staying D. changing
9.A. preventing B. showing C. losing D. holding
10.A. hit B. need C. have D. take
11.A. belief B. admission C. achievement D. attention
12.A. pull out B. destroy C. change D. throw away
13.A. fond B. ashamed C. tired D. proud
14.A. agreed B. offered C. permitted D. wondered
15.A. so B. then C. thus D. but
16.A. holes B. tracks C. damage D. marks
17.A. still B. never C. sometimes D. always
18.A. wounds B. anger C. scars D. pain
19.A. award B. provide C. consider D. treat
20.A. exist B. last C. disappear D. grow
How Can I Fight Laziness?
Lazy people will never gain anything in life. However, laziness can be defeated once a few changes have been made in your mind.
1. Many people lack sleep constantly, since they stay up too late and get up too early to prepare for work. These people have little motivation once they arrive home. Laziness works hand in hand with a lack of motivation and a tendency to put off things. By adjusting your sleep schedule to provide a few more hours of meaningful rest, you can fight laziness throughout the day.
Another way to fight laziness is to change your mind from passive to active. Some people treat their lives as if they were pushed from task to task.2. Laziness appears when you no longer feel in charge of your own mind.
Some people fight laziness by removing the temptations(诱惑) that surround them. A television in the living room may provide entertainment, but watching too much TV often contributes to laziness.3.34. Complete a few tasks and reward yourself with what you enjoy,such as a good dinner or a film.
Laziness can also be a lasting problem at home. Couples and children may all have different energy levels, but laziness can be spread if not dealt with immediately.5. Be the first to collect and wash dishes after a meal. Others in the home may eventually follow your example and perform their own task. It is difficult to practice laziness when you are surrounded by motivated people.
6. Enough exercise and a balanced diet can help you to develop a healthy lifestyle, thus enabling you to have more energy and help lift your spirits.
A. To fight family laziness, set an example.
B. Knowing how to fight laziness is important.
C. One way to fight laziness is to get enough sleep.
D. Finally, taking exercise regularly can help you fight laziness.
E. With strong determination, you will be able to achieve your goal.
F. Create a reward system for yourself, just as parents do for a child.
G. Others take a more positive approach, viewing each task as a challenge they must overcome alone.
Parents often believe that they have a good relationship with their teenagers. But last summer, Joanna and Henry noticed a change in their older son: suddenly he seemed to be talking far more to his friends than to his parents. “The door to his room is always shut.” Joanna noted.
Tina and Mark noticed similar changes in their 14-year-old daughter. ”She used to cuddle up with me on the sofa and talk,” said Mark. “Now we joke that she does this only when she wants something. Sometimes she wants to be treated like a little girl and sometimes like a young lady. The problem is figuring out which time is which.”
Before age 11, children like to tell their parents what’s on their minds. “ In fact, parents are first on the list.” Said Michael Riera, author of Uncommon Sense for Parents with Teenagers. “This completely changes during the teen years.” Riera explained. “They talk to their friends first, then maybe their teachers, and their parents last.”
Parents who know what’s going on in their teenagers’ lives are in the best position to help them. To break down the wall of silence, parents should create chances to understand what their children want to say, and try to find ways to talk and write to them. And they must give their children a mental break, for children also need freedom, though young. Another thing parents should remember is that to be a friend, not a manager, with their children is a better way to know them.
1.What troubles Tina and Mark most is that______
A. their daughter isn't as lovely as before.
B. they can't read their daughter's mind exactly.
C. they don't know what to say to their daughter.
D. their daughter talks with them only when she needs help.
2.Which of the following best explains ”the wall of silence” in the last paragraph?
A. Teenagers talk a lot with their friends.
B. Teenagers do not want to understand their parents.
C. Teenagers do not talk much with their parents.
D. Teenagers talk little about their own lives.
3.What can be learned from the passage?
A. Parents are unhappy with their growing children.
B. Parents have suitable ways to talk with their teenagers.
C. Parents should be patient with their silent teenagers.
D. Parent should try to understand their teenagers.
The impression you make at the beginning of an interview is very important Employers often decide to hire someone in the first three minutes of the interview. They judge you by your appearance, attitude and manners.
A friendly smile when you walk into the room is important. A smile shows a confident and positive attitude.When you introduce yourself, make eye contact with the interviewer. Some interviewers offer a handshake. Others don't.
Try to be as natural as possible. But pay attention to your body language. The way you sit, walk, gesture,use your voice and show feelings on your face is all part of your body language. It makes the interviewer know how you feel about yourself and the situation you are in. Are you feeling positively about yourself？Your abilities? Your interest in the job？
Speak clearly and loudly enough. Show interest and enthusiasm in your voice. When you speak, look at the interviewer. Also, don't say negative things about yourself, or former employer.
Listen to questions carefully. If you don't understand a question, ask the interviewer to repeat or explain:
"I'm sorry, but I didn't catch that."
"I'm not sure exactly what you mean."
Almost everyone is nervous in a job interview. Interviewers know that. They don't expect you to be totally calm and relaxed. But they expect you to try to control your nervousness. They expect you to show confidence in your ability to do the job.
At the end of the interview, thank the interviewer for her or his time. It's a good idea to send a short thank-you letter right after the interview, or deliver it by hand.
Phone the company if you have not heard anything after one week. Ask if they have made a decision about the job.
Good luck!
1.It can be inferred from the passage that _____.
A. you should always put on a smile when meeting the employer
B. you should stand still with respect before the employer
C. the first impression is very important in an interview
D. employers understand and like employees' nervousness
2.Why should we pay attention to our body language？
A. Because it can help us win the employer's positive impression
B. Because it can help us feel about the employer
C. Because it is needed by our employer.
D. Because we need it to improve our feelings
3.The main purpose of the passage is _____.
A. to give you some advice on the art of finding a job
B. to tell right from wrong about job interviews
C. to explain why we should do something about an interview
D. to suggest not being shy in an interview
4.Which of the following can be the best title for the passage？
A. A Friendly Smile
B. Making a Good Expression
C. Don't Be Nervous
D. Sending a Thank-You Letter
