Question

假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom正在学汉语，发来邮件询问如何提高汉语水平，请你根据提示，用英语给Tom回复。

提示:1.关注语音语调(四个声调)；

2.背诵经典；

3.写日记；

4.其他。

注意:1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

提示词:语调intonation声调tone经典作品classics

Dear Tom，

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Sincerely，

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Tom,

How is everything going? I’m writing to offer you some advice on how to learn Chinese well (how to improve your Chinese). And my advice is as follows:

To begin with, you should pay attention to your pronunciation and intonation. As you know, there is much difference between Chinese and English. For example, there are four tones in the Chinese intonation. So you should practice speaking Chinese frequently. What’s more, you’d better read and recite some Chinese classics, which helps you learn more about great thoughts and traditional Chinese culture. Besides, keeping a diary can be a good way to express yourself. Of course, it is also of great help to either learn some Chinese songs or watch some teaching videos. More importantly, remember to seek more opportunities to chat with Chinese native speakers.

I hope my advice can be beneficial. If you have any other questions, please don’t hesitate to ask.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，你的笔友Tom正在学汉语，发来邮件询问如何提高汉语水平，给他写一封电子邮件回复他。要点如下：1.关注语音语调(四个声调)；2.背诵经典；3.写日记；4.其他。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：pronunciation and intonation（语音语调），read and recite some Chinese classics（背诵中国经典作品），watch some teaching videos（看教学视频）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。