Question

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友David写邮件告知你他打算购买 《红楼梦》 (A Dream in Red Mansions) 英文版，但不知道纸质版本和有声版本哪个更适合。请你给他提出建议，要点如下:

1.你的建议；

2.你的理由(至少两条)；

注意:

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:有声读物audio book

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Answer

Dear David,

I’m Li Hua. Hearing that you cannot make up your mind about what kind of book to choose, I’d like to offer my suggestions to you.

If I were you, I would choose an audio book because of its great advantages. For one thing, you can make the most of your time using an audio book when waiting around or going for a walk, or when you are less likely to be distracted. For another, audio books are portable so as to be carried everywhere while paper books are too heavy and inconvenient. More importantly, I’m convinced that you’ll definitely benefit from the book whatever you’ll choose.

I hope my suggestions can be of some help to you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封电子邮件：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友David写邮件告知你他打算购买 《红楼梦》 (A Dream in Red Mansions) 英文版，但不知道纸质版本和有声版本哪个更适合。请你给他提出建议，要点如下:1.你的建议；2.你的理由(至少两条)。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：make up your mind（下决心）；choose an audio book because of its great advantages（选择有声书，因为它有很多优点）；less likely to be distracted（更不容易分心）；be of some help to you（对你有帮助）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。