Question

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Trevor对中国俗语很感兴趣，前些天给你发了一封邮件，向你请教“良言一句三冬暖，恶语伤人六月寒”的含义，请你结合以下要点给他回封邮件：

1.该俗语的含义;

2.你从中得到的启示。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Trevor,

Glad to receive your email and willing to explain to you the saying you mentioned in your email.

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Hope my explanation will be helpful to you.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Trevor,

The saying is meant to tell us the power of words. Put simply, a good word can make people warm in winter while a bad word can make them feel cold in summer. Of course it means more than that. It reminds us that simple but warm words can lift up a person who loses heart and make him through the day while destructive words to someone who is down can be what it takes to kill them.

Therefore, we should be cautious about our words in daily life and always say positive words to those who we come across and never hurt people by using mean words.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邮件，向 美国朋友Trevor 解释“良言一句三冬暖，恶语伤人六月寒”的含义并谈一下从中得到的启示。

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邮件，向美国朋友Trevor 解释“良言一句三冬暖，恶语伤人六月寒”的含义并谈一下从中得到的启示。

第1步：根据提示可知美国朋友Trevor向你请教“良言一句三冬暖，恶语伤人六月寒”的含义。你要就此回一封邮件。要点如下：（1）解释该俗语的含义；（2）谈谈从中得到的启示。全文时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），例如a good word can make people warm in winter while a bad word can make them feel cold in summer（良言一句三冬暖，恶语伤人六月寒），positive words(积极的话语)，mean words （刻薄的话语）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。