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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者 (从第 11 处起) 不计分。

Years ago, all my parents were involved in a serious car accidents. Uncle Bob took on the role as a father to him. I lived with him during that period. He allowed me stay with him though his home was not really bigger. He showed his care and love for me by pay attention to my health, education and what I needed at that time. I really appreciated the time he spent with me. We used to go on the trips together. We would just spend days either playing our guitars and reading our favorite car magazines. I always felt gratefully towards him. He was like a father figure who will always give me encouragement.

 

第一处: all→both 第二处: accidents →accident 第三处: him→me 第四处: stay之前加to 第五处: bigger→big 第六处: pay→paying 第七处: 去掉the 第八处: and→or 第九处: gratefully→grateful 第十处: will→would 【解析】 这是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。文章主要讲了作者的父母在一次车祸中去世,鲍勃叔叔扮演了作者父亲的角色。那时,鲍勃叔叔通过关心作者的健康、教育和作者需要的来表达对作者的关心和爱。作者对鲍勃叔叔为自己所做的一切,深表感激。 第一处:考查语境理解。句意:几年前,我的父母都卷入了一场严重的车祸。“我的父母双亲”是两个人,所以用both,all表示“三者或者三者以上”,所以all改成both。 第二处:考查名词。句意:几年前,我的父母都卷入了一场严重的车祸。“一场严重的车祸”是单数意义,用名词单数,所以accidents 改成accident。 第三处:考查代词。句意:对于我来说,鲍勃叔叔扮演了父亲的角色。文中表示“对于我”,所以him改成me。 第四处:考查固定用法。句意:他允许我和他住在一起,虽然他的家不是很大。allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事,该用法是固定用法,所以stay之前加to。 第五处:考查形容词。句意:他允许我和他住在一起,虽然他的家不是很大。这里没有进行比较,故用形容词原级,所以bigger改成big。 第六处:考查常见用法。句意:那时,他通过关心我的健康、教育和我需要的来表达对我的关心和爱。介词之后,用v+ing,所以pay改成paying。 第七处:考查固定用法。句意:我们过去常一起去旅行。go on trips去旅行,该短语是固定短语,所以去掉the。 第八处:考查连词。句意:我们会花上几天的时间,来弹吉他,或者阅读我们最喜欢的汽车杂志。文中表示选择关系,所以and改成or。 第九处:考查形容词。句意:我总是对他心存感激。作感官动词之后的表语,用形容词,所以gratefully改成grateful。 第十处:考查时态。这里含有一个定语从句。表示从过去的某一时间来看,将来要发生的动作或呈现的状态,用一般过去将来时,所以will改成would。  
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A study by researchers showed that texting on mobile phones could help smokers quit smoking.

The study 1.(publish) on Tuesday in a journal showed among smokers 2. received a 12-week-long mobile phone-based message on quitting smoking, 6.5% stopped smoking by the end of the study.

The researchers from the Second Xiangya Hospital of Central South University in China said the intervention (干预) could have a 3.(great) reach than in-person treatments. It has great potential to improve population health and should 4.(consider) for large-scale use in China, according to the study.

They 5.(conduct) a trial across China from August 2016 to May 2017, covering 6. total of 1,369 adult smokers. Participants were assigned to a 12-week intervention consisting 7. either high-frequency or low-frequency messaging, or to a control group that received text 8.(message) unrelated to quitting. Twelve weeks later, 6.5% of them stopped continuous smoking 9.(active) in the high-frequency group 10. 6% got rid of smoking in the low-frequency group. 1.9 % of them stopped smoking in the control group.

 

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He followed the dog to a bus stop. The dog stopped and started looking at the ______. The dog checked out the time, and then sat on one of the benches _______ . Along came a bus. The dog went around to the front, looked at the number and ________. The butcher, by now, ________, followed it onto the bus.

The bus traveled through the town and out into the suburb. _______ it got off with the_______ still in its mouth. Several minutes later, the dog turned into a house. It walked up the path, and dropped the bag on the _______. Then it walked back down the path, quickly _______ for the door, and ______ itself against the door. But there’s no answer at the house, so the dog had to wait at the door.

After a while, there finally was a _______ to the situation. A big guy opened the door, and started kicking the dog and ______ him. The butcher ran up, and said “Why do you shout at the dog? It is really a _______.” The guy responded, “You call this clever? This is the second time this week that this _______ dog’s forgotten its _______.” On the way back home, the butcher thought to himself, “Greed may ________ have limits for the dog owner.”

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2.A. knew B. wrote C. read D. felt

3.A. money B. coins C. bones D. gold

4.A. Unexpectedly B. Undoubtedly C. Disappointingly D. Surprisingly

5.A. curious B. dangerous C. ashamed D. frightened

6.A. number B. timetable C. post D. bus

7.A. patiently B. anxiously C. restlessly D. painfully

8.A. flew off B. got off C. came on D. climbed on

9.A. open-minded B. open-ended C. open-mouthed D. open-hearted

10.A. Finally B. Firstly C. Secondly D. Thirdly

11.A. sausage B. bone C. ticket D. bag

12.A. balcony B. step C. ceiling D. wall

13.A. paid B. applied C. dashed D. asked

14.A. enjoyed B. amused C. taught D. threw

15.A. starting point B. turning point C. bottom line D. front line

16.A. comforting B. praising C. scolding D. admiring

17.A. servant B. genius C. master D. butcher

18.A. stupid B. clever C. unforgettable D. thoughtful

19.A. mission B. aim C. key D. route

20.A. still B. even C. ever D. never

 

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This Is Why Traffic Lights Are Red, Yellow, and Green

Ever wondered why blue doesn’t mean go and brown mean stop?1..

The idea that red means stop and green means go has impacted our lives in more ways than just traffic signals. We have been taught from a young age that the color red means danger.2.. But why were those particular colors chosen for traffic lights in the first place? For something we have to look at every day, why couldn’t they have been prettier colors like magenta(紫红) and turquoise (天蓝色)?

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As far as red goes, that’s always been a color that indicated danger, long before cars were even around. Red is the color with the longest wavelength. 4.. The color yellow was used to caution drivers because it has a slightly shorter wavelength than red, but not as short as green.

5.. Employ these driving rules first and know that traffic lights have certainly come a long way.

A. And the color green means it’s OK to move forward

B. Turns out, there’s a perfectly good explanation for it

C. It can be seen from a greater distance than other colors

D. bright white could easily be seen from a distance by us

E. bright white could easily be mistaken for stars at night

F. Why don’t we use blue to mean go and brown mean stop

G. So don’t get mad next time you’re impatiently waiting at a traffic light

 

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To better understand the harms of secrecy, researchers first set out to understand what secrets people keep, and how often they keep them. They found that 97% of people have at least one secret at any given moment, and people have, on average, 13 secrets.

Across several studies, researchers asked participants to estimate how frequently they hid their secret during conversations with others, and also how frequently they thought about the secret outside of social interactions. They found that the more frequently people simply thought about their secrets, the lower their well-being.

Following up this research, a new paper reveals why thinking about secrets is so harmful. Turning the question around, the consequences of telling secrets are examined. Researchers found that when a person reveals a secret to a third party, it does not reduce how often they have to hide the secret from others who are still kept in the dark. Rather, it reduces how often their mind wanders toward the secret in irrelevant moments.

Therefore, if you choose to still keep something secret, talking to another person can make the world of difference. Secrets don’t have to hurt as much as they do.

1.Which is not one of the harms of keeping secrets?

A. Being physically sick. B. Mental problems.

C. Harmed relationships. D. Hiding somewhere.

2.Why is keeping secrets so harmful?

A. Because you must hide them.

B. Because you often think about them.

C. Because it’s difficult to keep secrets.

D. Because you must watch what to say.

3.How can people reduce the harm of keeping secrets?

A. By working hard. B. By keeping 13 secrets.

C. By thinking about the secrets. D. By telling secrets to a third person.

4.Which is the text probably taken from?

A. An advertisement B. A research report

C. A biology textbook. D. A travel brochure.

 

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The 9.5-metre sperm whale (抹香鲸) was found by rescuers from the Wakatobi National Park. The whale had swallowed 5.9 kilograms of plastic waste containing 115 plastic cups, four plastic bottles, 25 plastic bags, and more than 1,000 other kinds of pieces of plastic, park chief Heri Santoso told the reporter.

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A report released earlier this year stated that the amount of plastic in the ocean is likely to increase.

1.What can we know about the sperm whale?

A. Its stomach is the home of plastic waste.

B. It died of swallowing lots of plastic waste.

C. It was the first whale to eat plastic waste.

D. It had eaten much plastic waste before its death.

2.Which can best replace the underlined word “deduce” in paragraph 3?

A. confirm B. cause

C. approve D. contain

3.Which country dumps the most plastic waste into the oceans?

A. Thailand B. Indonesia

C. Vietnam D. Philippines

4.What’s the main idea of the passage?

A. Philippines puts away 1.29 million tons of plastic.

B. A sperm whale was found dead near Kapota Island.

C. Much dumped plastic waste was found in a dead whale.

D. We should take measures to reduce the waste in whales.

 

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