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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Sandy arrived at the museum at last. She was so tired that she has to find a chair to sit on. If she sat down, she noticed nice painting on the wall. She stared with it for a long time--- such long, that she fell asleep.

Suddenly, she felt a tap on his shoulder. She looked up and saw a man on a horse wear a metal suit. He was only a sculpture a moment ago, but by now he was alive and talking to Sandy! She was so frightening that she ran down the hall.

From around the corner she could hear someone singing. She went to see what it was but there was nobody in sight.

 

【解析】本文是一篇记叙短文。讲述了Sandy进入博物馆后坐在椅子上睡着了,发现有人在拍她,她就看到博物馆的雕像变成了活人和她说话,她吓着跑出去,等再回去看时发现并没有人在那儿。 “She was so tired that she has to find a chair to sit on”,根据was,可知此句为过去时态,前后时态应保持一致。故将has改为had。 2.“If she sat down, she noticed nice painting on the wall”联系前后句,此处应该引领时间状语从句。故将If改为Once或者When或者After。 3. she noticed nice painting on the wall.根据painting用的是单数可知,此处指的是墙上的一幅画。故添加a。 4.“ She stared with it for a long time”,“stare at盯着,凝视”,固定用法,没有“stare with”这个短语。故将with改为at。 5.“ such long”,so用来修饰形容词或副词,such用来修饰名词,此句中long为形容词。故将such改为so。 6.“she felt a tap on his shoulder”,由前文可看出Sandy是女生,his是he的物主代词,her是she的物主代词。故将his改为her。 7.“She looked up and saw a man on a horse wear a metal suit”, wear与 a horse是主动的关系,所以用现在分词作定语。也可以把a man on a horse wear a metal suit是作动词saw的宾语从句,由语境可知用一般过去时;故将wear改为wearing或wore。 8.“but by now he was alive and talking to Sandy”,“by now到目前为止,现如今”,一般会和现在完成时连用。此处强调的是“现在”,应该用now。故删去by。 9.“She was so frightening that she ran down the hall”,“frightening令人惧怕的”主要用于修饰物,“frightened害怕的”主要用于修饰人。故将frightening改为frightened。 10.“She went to see what it was but there was nobody in sight”,根据nobody可知,此处和人物有关,她想去看看它是谁而不是它是什么。故将what改为who。
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