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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I think that teenage years should be the best in everyone life because you have few problems than adults.Most teenagers have a lot of friends with whom they can discuss things they are interesting in.Teenagers have a preference to uptodate clothes and modern music.They also like do sports and compete.Their parents are such curious about their life that they’ll sometimes enter their rooms without a permission.Teenagers stop think like children as they grow upand their beliefs and interests changes as well.So my opinion is that teenage years are total magical and I’d like to be a teenager forever.

 

everyone→everyone’s few→fewer interesting→interested to→for like后面加上to such→so 去掉a think→thinking changes→change total→totally 【解析】 本文为一篇说明文。说明了作者的观点:青少年时期是每个人生活中最好的时期。 1.考查名词所有格。句意:我认为青少年时期应该是每个人的生活中最好的时期,因为你的问题比成年人少。分析句子可知,每个人的生活应该为所有格形式,修饰名词。故everyone改为everyone’s。 2. 考查形容词比较级。句意:我认为青少年时期应该是每个人生活中最好的时期,因为你的问题比成年人少。分析句子可知,其后than表明此处形容词需用比较级形式。故few改为fewer 3. 考查固定搭配。句意:大多数青少年有很多朋友,可以和他们讨论他们感兴趣的事情。be interested in为固定搭配,意为“对……感兴趣”。故interesting改为interested 4. 考查固定搭配。句意:青少年喜欢最新的衣服和现代音乐。have a preference for为固定搭配,意为“最喜欢……”故to改为for 5. 考查动词的固定形式。句意:他们也喜欢运动和比赛。喜欢做特定的或某一具体的行动,一时的爱好like后加不定式。故like后面加上to。 6. 考查固定句型。句意:他们的父母对他们的生活非常好奇,有时他们会未经允许进入他们的房间。so+形容词+that,意为“如此……以致”,前句curious为形容词。故such改为so 7. 考查不可数名词。句意:他们的父母对他们的生活非常好奇,有时他们会未经允许进入他们的房间。permission为不可数名词,其前不需要加冠词。故去掉a 8. 考查现在分词。句意:青少年在成长过程中不再像孩子一样思考,他们的信仰和兴趣也随之改变。stop doing为固定搭配,意为“停止做某事”。故think改为thinking 9. 考查主谓一致。句意:青少年在成长过程中不再像孩子一样思考,他们的信仰和兴趣也随之改变。分析句子,主语为their beliefs and interests谓语动词需用复数形式。故changes改为change 10. 考查副词。句意:所以我的观点是,青少年是完全神奇的,我希望永远是一个青少年。分析句子,修饰形容词magical需用副词。故total改为totally  
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2.A. divided    B. cut    C. broken    D. separated

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7.A. so    B. therefore    C. likely    D. perhaps

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13.A. proud    B. tired    C. fond    D. careful

14.A. respect    B. rank    C. elect    D. regard

15.A. ever    B. even    C. seldom    D. never

16.A. Country    B. Question    C. Disease    D. Republic

17.A. Finally    B. However    C. Meanwhile    D. Instead

18.A. returns    B. belongs    C. refers    D. adds

19.A. turned away    B. run away    C. broke away    D. kept away

20.A. unite    B. reject    C. fight    D. help

 

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D.find suitable volunteers to rare for virtual pets

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C.Soccer doesn’t mean a lot to Hamm.

D.Ahearn thinks breaking all three records is the most important thing.

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B.was a famous woman soccer player

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C.To promote an activity

D.To describe an experience

 

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B.Dr. Johnson is famous for his weather observation

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D.English conversations usually start with the weather

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C.A historical concept. D.An unknown phenomenon.

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A.Bill Bryson has little knowledge of the weather

B.there is nothing special about the English weather

C.the English weather attracts people to the British Isles

D.English people talk about the weather for its uncertainty

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B.To analyze misconceptions about the English weather.

C.To find fault with both Bill Bryson and Jeremy Paxman.

D.To convince people that the English weather is changeable.

 

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