Question

Guided Writing

使用了20多年的学校图书馆因满足不了广大师生的需求而停止运营，进行改建。校长室希望就新馆的环境规划、设备更新和运行效率等方面征求学生的具体建议。假设你是本校学生何月平，给校长室写信，就至少两个方面提出自己的建议内容，并阐述建议的理由。

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Answer

Dear headmaster,

I am He Yueping, a student from class 1, grade 3. I'm glad to hear that our library will be rebuilt because of its incapability of serving us. I'm writing to offer suggestions.

First of all, I hope our new library will add an electronic reading room. As is known to all, in today's technology era, the computer is an important tool for us to learn knowledge and obtain information. For instance, with the help of the Internet, we can quickly look up the knowledge we need, which will greatly improve our learning efficiency and make more time for us to review.

In addition, I hope to add several group study rooms, as there are many assignments that need group discussion. In such a room, we can discuss freely without disturbing others.

The two above are the suggestions that I have come up with. I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration.

Yours truly,

He Yueping

【解析】

本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封书信：使用了20多年的学校图书馆因满足不了广大师生的需求而停止运营，进行改建。校长室希望就新馆的环境规划、设备更新和运行效率等方面征求学生的具体建议。假设你是本校学生何月平，给校长室写信，就至少两个方面提出自己的建议内容，并阐述建议的理由。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； rebuild（改建、重建），serve（服务），knowledge（知识），obtain（获得）， efficiency（效率），assignment（作业、任务），incapability （不能胜任），technology era（科技时代）及disturb（打扰）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。