Question

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

At a recent 6-ycar-old's birthday party together with my daughter, I watched two girls playing in a playroom. Three boys came over and decided they were going to drive the girls away. “No girls allowed, "said one boy. The other two boys crowded around the girls for effect. One of the girls, in fear, did as she was ordered and left the playroom. The other girl stood her ground. “We were here first. You can't kick us out,"she said.

They weren't my kids, so I gently told the boys that everyone was allowed to play in the playroom. The boys ignored me, and continued to push the remaining girl out of the room. The girl fell on the ground and screamed in pain. The boys went on with their no-girls-allowed game. I took the girl over to the parents at the party and explained what had happened. What followed was a lesson in how girls were schooled in male power and privilege（特权）.

The girl's mother told her that she should have stayed away from the boys. The message to the girl was that it was her fault because she didn't do what the boys had ordered. A father of one of the boys laughed and told me that I should have caught the girl as she fell. There were no consequences for the boys. Their violence was so much an accepted part of their behaviour that it didn't even raise an eyebrow. In fact, the attitude of the father was that using physical strength to get what you wanted was to be celebrated. The message to the boys was that they could hurt girls without any consequence. Another mother said,"It's so hard for boys and girls to play together at this age.”

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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To that mother's words, my response is: No! It's not!

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Paragraph 2:

My six-year-old daughter observed the events at the party.

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Answer

Paragraph 1:

To that mother's words, my response is: No! It's not! We are all humans, born without any difference. Though it seems to be a small thing, just a quarrel among children, what it shows is that girls are now suffering from prejudice. Actually, boys and girls are just like two poles of our Earth, so they can't be apart and there is nothing about who are better. Boys should have are respectful attitude to girls. I think all the parents should teach their children that boys and girls have the same rights.

Paragraph 2:

My six-year-old daughter observed the events at the party. And afterwards she said," Mum, I think those boys can't drive the girls away and even injure them."I said," That's true, my dear. Girls are now being looked down upon, but you need to understand that we are equal, though some people don't think like this. ”My daughter nodded and said," I will try my best to stop violence against women and girls.”

【解析】

这是一篇读后续写。

通过阅读所给文章可知，作者在女儿的六岁派对上目睹了一次女孩子被男孩欺负的过程，作者温和地劝说，结果男孩们不理会，继续把剩下的女孩推出房间。女孩跌倒在地上，痛得尖叫起来。女孩的母亲告诉她，她应该远离男孩。给那个女孩的信息是这是她的错，因为她没有按男孩们的要求去做。作者认为他们的暴力行为在很大程度上是他们行为中被接受的一部分，甚至没有引起人们的注意。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：对于那位母亲的话，我的回答是:不!它不是!所以后文应该是作者阐述自己的观点。作者认为我们都是人，生来没有任何区别，认为所有的父母都应该教育他们的孩子，男孩和女孩有同样的权利。第二段开头是：我六岁的女儿在晚会上目睹了这一切。本段应该写作者的女儿对这件事的看法，主要为作者和女儿的对话。女儿说会尽最大努力制止针对妇女和女孩的暴力行为。

续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。