Question

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Growing up on a small farm，I lived a life that I took for granted. My father worked in the city as a plumber(水暖工). He was not highly educated，but he was smart，looking at problems in an engineer’s way. He was a man made of leather，brass and chewing tobacco who tried to teach my brother and me useful things，including respect. He also had a temper and was strict with us for he would scold us when we made some careless mistakes. Sometimes，my father seemed like a distant enemy to me and I didn’t like him very much.

One day I came home from primary school and his car was already there. Once inside，I was told by my mother that he didn’t feel well. His back hurt. My father never missed work；in fact，when he came home，he went to the barn to work even more. I remember looking at him secretly around the corner as he lay on his bed in the middle of the day.

Later，my mother told me he got multiple myeloma (多发性骨髓瘤)，a type of blood cancer. As the cancer grows，the person will shrink because the disease destroys the body’s energy and the abnormal antibodies cause problems for other cells and tissue. Bones eventually look like Swiss cheese，and when they break，they may never heal. But I didn’t realize that my father’s time was rather limited and just treated him the same way I used to.

For the last year of my father’s life，his entire day consisted of rising from his hospital bed in the living room and walking to his chair to sit and think. He was predictably in that chair when I came home one day during the ninth grade. I do not remember where my mother and brother were，but the two of us were alone.

注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1：

He asked me to sit down and what he told me still moves me these decades later.

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Paragraph 2：

At that moment，I realized that he was doing more than telling.

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Answer

Paragraph 1：

He asked me to sit down and what he told me still moves me these decades later. Lying on the hospital bed，he told me about his life on the farm，his family growing up，his loves，and his heartbreaks. Although he was tortured by the cancer，his inner self rushed out to me in a great flood as if a pipe had burst all of a sudden. He had been speaking for maybe an hour or more and mentioned that he actually felt regretful about being so strict with us.

Paragraph 2：

At that moment，I realized that he was doing more than telling. He was asking to be forgiven. All it took was to understand that was what he needed，and I forgave everything，immediately. The thought of my father being an enemy disappeared，with tears rolling down on my face. I held my father’s hands tightly，enjoying this deep but quiet love. Although he has gone for a long time，I still always remember that moment and the realization that I love him.

【解析】

这是一篇读后续写作文。

通过阅读所给文章可知, 作者在一个小农场长大, 父亲是城里的水管工。后来作者的父亲得了多发性骨髓瘤, 一种血癌。作者没有意识到父亲的时间是相当有限, 对待他的方式与过去一样。直到作者九年级的一天, 回家时父亲不出所料地坐在了那把椅子上。那天作者和父亲两个单独在一起的时光记忆尤新。

续写部分分为两段, 第一段开头是：他让我坐下来, 他给我说的话在几十年后仍然感动着我。所以后文应该是讲述父亲那天所说的话, 父亲内心的自我却像洪水一样向作者涌来, 就像水管突然爆裂一样。第二段开头是：在那一刻, 我意识到他做的远比说的多。本段应该写作者对父亲的话的感悟, 意识到父亲是在请求原谅。作者紧紧地握着父亲的手, 享受着这深沉而安静的爱。虽然父亲已经走了很长一段时间, 作者仍然记得那一刻, 作者意识到自己爱父亲。

续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度, 我们要熟悉所给划线词语, 恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。