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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分;

Nowadays, it is more and more difficulty for people to find jobs. Even graduates from key universities can’t find out suitable jobs. Here was some advice for those graduates.

Firstly, as an university graduate, you must know well about yourself, your knowledge, your ability and your hobbies including. Secondly, you’d better study about the job you want to do, what will be helpful to us in finding a good job. Thirdly, get ready for your interview carefully that you can behave well. Besides, introducing yourself to others properly and show your advantages to them are necessary. God is always to provide chances with those who are prepared.

 

1.difficulty→difficult 2. find后的out去掉 3. was→is 4. an→a 5. including→included 6. what→which 7. us→you 8. that前加so 9. show→showing 10. with→for 【解析】 这是一篇说明文。现在大学生找工作很难,文章就如何找到合适的工作给毕业生提了四点建议。 1. 考查形容词。句意:现在,人们找到工作变得越来越难了。句子谓语动词为is,且根据句意,其后应用形容词作表语。故将difficulty改为difficult。 2. 考查实义动词。句意:即使重点大学的毕业生也不能找到合适的工作。find out意为“(尤指通过刻意努力)发现,找出,查明”,而find可直接作为实义动词接名词作宾语,意为“找到”。根据句意,应将find out后的out去掉。 3. 考查一般现在时。句意:这是给大学生的一些建议。由于前两句话都使用的是一般现在时,所以这句话也应使用一般现在时。故将was改为is。 4. 考查不定冠词。句意:首先,作为一名大学毕业生,你要很好的了解你自己,包含你的知识、你的能力和你的爱好。“university”是以辅音音素开始的,故将an改为a。 5. 考查过去分词作定语。句意同上。“your knowledge, your ability and your hobbies”应该是被包含,所以其后应该接过去分词作定语。故将including改为included。 6. 考查非限制性定语从句。句意:第二,你应该更好地了解你想要做的工作,这对你找到好的工作很有用。这是一个非限制性定语从句,先行词为逗号前半句话,指代主句,从句中作主语,所以关系词应使用which,what不引导定语从句。故将what改为which。 7. 考查人称代词。句意同上。这篇文章是作者写给毕业生的建议,第二段使用的是第二人称的写法,所以根据句意应将us改为you。 8. 考查状语从句的连词。句意:第三,仔细地准备面试,这样才能表现好。这是一个目的状语从句,仔细地准备面试的目的是能好好地表现自己。所以连词应使用so that,故在that前加so。 9. 考查动名词。句意:另外,向别人恰当地介绍自己以及向他们展示自己的优势是很有必要的。and前后是两个并列的主语,由introducing使用的动名词可知,show应该也使用动名词作主语,故将show改为showing。 10. 考查介词。句意:上帝总是给那些准备好的人提供机会。“provide sth. for sb.”意为“为某人提供某物”,为固定搭配。故将with改为for。  
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________ it hadn’t been published I still gained so much from the ________,” says Moira.

1.A.avoided B.enjoyed C.intended D.postponed

2.A.actively B.energetically C.permanently D.professionally

3.A.influential B.safe C.tentative D.tiresome

4.A.certainty B.dream C.choice D.purpose

5.A.challenging B.declining C.demanding D.promising

6.A.bought B.introduced C.produced D.received

7.A.reviews B.revision C.rewards D.reservation

8.A.employ B.guide C.represent D.trust

9.A.business B.feet C.own D.way

10.A.came over B.pulled down C.took off D.went through

11.A.adapting B.covering C.deleting D.polishing

12.A.after B.before C.since D.when

13.A.interested B.fascinated C.restricted D.tolerated

14.A.absurd B.common C.disappointing D.terrifying

15.A.instantly B.purely C.sadly D.wonderfully

16.A.found B.made C.permitted D.set

17.A.got down B.put up C.took on D.went over

18.A.flew B.flashed C.floated D.survived

19.A.As if B.Even if C.Ever since D.If only

20.A.process B.procedure C.recreation D.terminal

 

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Are you looking for a new pastime that will create a balance between physical activity and relaxation? Then yoga may be the perfect choice for you. Yoga can be practiced by people of all ages and levels of fitness.1. It's a great way to strengthen your muscles and become more flexible.

In the 1930s, Indian Sri Tirumali and K. Pattabhi developed one of the most popular forms of yoga practised worldwide today. They worked together using an ancient Sansknt text called Yoga Korunta to create a set routine of yoga movements and breathing exercises. 2.

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4.As well as making you stronger and more flexible, it can also help you to stay calm. By focusing on your breathing while doing physical exercise, you are able to get a balance between mind and body. In addition, yoga helps to make us healthier so we are less likely to get common illnesses like colds.

Furthermore, yoga encourages you to think about what you're doing. Often you will close your eyes while doing certain movements.5.After a few lessons you'll stop looking at what the others around you are doing. You will stop comparing yourself and start focusing on yourself.

A. It can also be done anywhere at any time.

B. The result of their co-operation was ashtanga yoga.

C. Whatever kind of yoga you choose, there are many long-term benefits.

D. This allows you to concentrate better and it makes you less competitive.

E. Every time someone practices ashtanga, he or she does exactly the same movements.

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Seeking a cost-effective way to monitor beach safety over large areas, we have developed a system called Shark Spotter. It combines artificial intelligence (AI), computing power, and drone (无人机) technology to identify and warn lifesavers to sharks near swimmers. The project is a cooperation between the University of Technology Sydney and The Ripper Group, which is pioneering the use of drones—called “Westpac Little Ripper Lifesavers”—in the search and rescue movement in Australia.

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If a shark is detected, Shark Spotter provides both a visual sign on the computer screen and an audible warning to the operator. The operator confirms the warning and sends text messages from the Shark Spotter system to the Surf Life Savers for further action. In an emergency, the drone is equipped with a lifesaving flotation pod (漂浮仓) together with an electronic shark repellent (驱逐装置) that can be dropped into the water in cases where swimmers are in severe trouble, trapped in a rip, or if there are sharks close by.

In January 2018, the Westpac Little Ripper Lifesavers was used to rescue two young swimmers caught in a rip at Lennox Head, NSW. The drone flew down the beach some 800 meters from the lifeguard station, and a lifesaving flotation pod was dropped from the drone. The complete rescue operation took 70 seconds.

We believe Shark Spotter is a win-win for both marine life and beachgoers. This unique technology combines dynamic video image processing AI and advanced drone technology to creatively deal with the global challenge of ensuring safe beaches, protecting environments, and promoting tourism.

1.A Shark Spotter is ________.

A. a solution to monitor sharks

B. an equipment to identify lifesavers

C. a technology to prevent shark attacks

D. a project to pioneer the use of drones

2.When a shark is spotted near a swimmer, the system will ________.

A. take timely action B. analyze the visual data

C. classify the identified objects D. turn on “deep learning” mode

3.The example in the 5th paragraph shows us that the system is

A. efficient in saving lives B. effective in detecting sharks

C. smart in driving sharks away D. practical over the whole sea area

4.What is the author’s attitude towards the future of SharkSpotter?

A. Doubtful. B. Optimistic.

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    Most of us have looked up at the stars that fill the night sky and wondered whether we’re alone in the universe. Indeed, the question of whether there’ s life out there has been something humankind ’s been asking itself for countless years. But thanks to China’s Five-hundred-meter Aperture Spherical Telescope (FAST), the answer to this question may come a lot sooner than we expected.

The telescope has a huge round reflector, which measures 500 meters across and has a perimeter(周长)of 1.6 kilometers. Because of its great size, it would have been both difficult and inefficient to get FAST to move like a regular telescope. Instead, FAST’s designers came up with a great solution: its surface is made up of 4450 panels which can be individually adjusted. This clever design feature allows scientists to detect radio signals from any angle with a great degree of accuracy. “Panels can change their positions through connected wires and parallel (关联的) robots. We can control their position with an accuracy of 1 mm,” Zheng Yuanpeng, chief engineer of the telescope’s panel project, told Xinhua News Agency.

FAST’s engineers also had the task of finding a suitable location. As any interference would affect its ability to detect distant radio waves, it needed to be built in a remote area. Luckily, the perfect spot was found in the beautiful mountains of Guizhou Province. “There are three hills about 500 meters away from one another, creating a valley that is perfect to support the telescope," Sun Caihong, chief engineer of FAST’ s construction, told Xinhua.

And although it wasn’t yet fully operated, FAST had already made great discoveries by October 2017. Since 1967, only around 2000 pulsars (脉冲星) have been discovered, yet FAST had detected six more by October 2017. Once FAST is fully up and running, we may finally have the answer to one of the biggest questions in history.

1.What is the purpose of mentioning the question in Paragraph 1?

A.To introduce the new giant telescope.

B.To explain why there is life in universe.

C.To remind readers to think about the life in space.

D.To emphasize the question that should be answered.

2.What can we know from Paragraph 2?

A.The telescope is made up of many panels.

B.The area of FAST is about 800 square kilometers.

C.The engineer can handle FAST’s position accurately.

D.The individual panel helps scientists catch radio signals.

3.Why was FAST built in Guizhou?

A.Because Guizhou is a remote province.

B.Because Guizhou has an ideal valley.

C.Because Guizhou has beautiful mountains.

D.Because Guizhou has the ability to build it.

4.What does the last paragraph mainly talk about?

A.FAST’s timeline. B.FAST’s future.

C.FAST’s operation. D.FAST’s discoveries.

 

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