假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
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2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The school Dance Club aims to enrich students’ school life and involving students in diverse dancing activity. If you’re good at or interesting in dancing, the dance club is exactly that you are looking for. Here are the requirements that you need to pay attention to.
It is no doubt that enthusiasm for dancing is must. You are more likely to be admitted unless you can organize events or had dancing experiences. Additional, we highly appreciate a strong sense of responsibility and good team spirit.
If you want to join in us, please turn in your application before October 30. For more information, please contact us at danceclub123@ gmail. com.
阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
Situated in Beijing’s Shichahai scenic area, CAVE looks no different from any 1. cafe in the city on the outside,2. people stepping in for a cup of coffee will find it interesting inside. Some customers are holding and touching hedgehogs (刺猬) 3. (gentle) in their palms.
In recent years, an increasing number of animal themed cafes 4. (gain) huge popularity among China’s city dwellers. With this 5. (rise) trend, a bunch of eateries making money out of housing unique animals such as hedgehogs has sprung up.
In Beijing alone, there are several cafes or restaurants like CAVE. There is a Japanese pub, 6. has three raccoons (浣熊) and a cafe where customers can take 7. (photo) with about 30 huskies (哈士奇).
CAVE. which is a also the city’s first hedgehog themed cafe, now has seven hedgehogs kept in cages in a room 8. (separate) from the dining area. If customers want to play with the hedgehogs, they need to put 9. thick gloves and the waiters will bring them out and put them onto the customers’ hands.
“I think hedgehogs are a very good idea. It’s original and interesting,” said Serhii Melnyk, a tourist from Poland who 10. (stop) by the café to grab an Americano and was attracted to the animal.
It’s been a long time since I wrote a creative essay. Recently, with lots of time and lack of inspiration, I accepted a _________ to teach creative nonfiction. _________ I couldn’t get myself to write my own stories. I could require that my students tell theirs.
“You’re going to be _________ a journal in this class.” I said. “And I want you to tell your stories like they matter.”
“Why do they matter?” a boy named Michael asked. “I mean, who _________ about our stories?”
No one said a wont. Perhaps they were just tired from their _________ lives. Many worked full-time while in school full-time. Most might not have the faintest _________ that their stories did matter. They didn’t even know that their stories were stories — as beautiful and hard — as their own lives.
_______, I looked at Michael. “They matter because they do.” I said. “Because you’re here and you can tell them. Stories allow us to make _________ of what we’re _________. When you __________ your experience into a story, it becomes yours and not just something that __________ to you.”
Michael didn’t look __________, but he didn’t challenge me either.
Later, Michael wrote about how he grew up in one of the worst neighborhoods in Boston and how his high school teacher, who saw his __________, helped him fill out a college application.
I __________ Michael to read his essay out loud. After he finished, the class went so __________ that we could hear the sound of each other’s breath. I looked at Michael and saw a softening and __________ in his eyes.
After a moment, I said, “That’s __________ you tell your stories.” That night, I picked up my journal from where it __________, dusty and __________. For the first time in months. I had __________ to write.
1.A.business B.view C.reward D.position
2.A.Although B.As C.Unless D.Before
3.A.publishing B.keeping C.updating D.reading
4.A.worries B.talks C.reads D.cares
5.A.beautiful B.secret C.busy D.simple
6.A.dream B.hobby C.picture D.idea
7.A.Happily B.Angrily C.Firmly D.Sadly
8.A.meaning B.notice C.fun D.use
9.A.set about B.gone through C.looked for D.taken on
10.A.shape B.take C.break D.treat
11.A.came B.fell C.worked D.happened
12.A.moved B.convinced C.confused D.embarrassed
13.A.poverty B.fortune C.potential D.sorrow
14.A.asked B.helped C.forced D.allowed
15.A.still B.concerned C.disappointed D.excited
16.A.truth B.doubt C.faith D.weakness
17.A.how B.when C.because D.why
18.A.started B.lay C.went D.hid
19.A.new B.packed C.untouched D.torn
20.A.time B.inspiration C.strength D.right
Cold Dew, the 17th solar term of the year, begins this year on Oct 8 and ends on Oct. 23. At this time, temperatures are much lower in most areas of China, The dew is greater and colder and there will be less rain. Autumn crops will be ripe. 1.
Foggy autumn
Temperatures drop significantly in October. The cold air encounters autumn rain. 2. When the humidity (湿度) is high, there will be foggy regions formed in many areas of China.
Season for fishing
People always say that fishing in shallow water in autumn does make sense. 3. Fish all swim to shallow water areas where the water temperature is relatively high.
Season for drinking chrysanthemum (菊花) wine
4. To prevent autumn dryness, many regions in China have the custom of drinking chrysanthemum wine. This is a tradition of the Double Ninth Festival, which often falls around Cold Dew. According to ancient records, drinking the wine made with chrysanthemums grants people long lasting youth.
5.
During Cold Dew, North China takes on a look of late autumn with white clouds, red leaves and early frost. On the day of the Double Ninth Festival people often climb hills with comes, a kind of plant. This custom aims to dispel evils, and originated in the Eastern Han Dynasty (AD25-220).
A. a great time for hiking
B. Season for eating outside.
C. Chrysanthemum is the typical flower of Cold Dew.
D. Here are four things you should know about Cold Dew.
E. The abundant water vapor (蒸汽) turns into misty rain or fog.
F. Extracts of the Chrysanthemum have long been used in makeup.
G. Temperatures decrease quickly and sunshine cannot reach the deep water thoroughly.
America is well known for being a melting pot of different ethnic groups and cultures, but nowhere is this diversity more pronounced than in Queens, New York.
Here, second-generation Puerto Ricans live alongside third-generation Greeks and first-generation Koreans, all united by a common feeling of pride in their American identity. However, they are also proud and curious about their ancestral roots. National Geographic’s Genographic Project, also known as the Human Family Tree, set out to trace the origins by examining their genetic makeup using a simple DNA test. What interested them more was something that intrigues us all: the history of our recent ancestry. One recurring theme among immigrants seems to be the hard work and sacrifices that went into building a new life, and how their descendants now feel a duty to honor that effort by working hard too. Here is one Queens resident’s story.
Richard, 38
My great-grandfather Tomas came to America from Poland when he was fifteen. His mother had died, and his father remarried. Tomas didn’t like his stepmother, so he ran away to Belgium, where he boarded a ship to America—without a ticket. Arriving in America with nothing, he got a job on the railroads in California. Then one day he saw an announcement in a newspaper that was read by immigrants. It was from his brother in New York who was also seeking his fortune in America and was looking for him. Tomas got in touch and they had an emotional reunion in New York, where Tomas subsequently settled. This is the story that my grandmother has passed down to us, to my parents, and all my aunts and uncles. She is an amazing woman and I suppose: the one who holds us all together. She’s actually quite forgetful now, but she never forgets family details. What that has meant is that all of us have a strong family bond and a strong sense of belonging to a group that has struggled and fought together to steered here.
1.What is special about Queens?
A.Conflicting ethnic minorities live here.
B.Many foreigners like to travel to this place.
C.The pronunciation varies from person to person.
D.Many different people and cultures are gathering here.
2.What does the “one recurring theme” in paragraph 2 refer to?
A.A sad experience. B.A common subject.
C.An unknown topic. D.An unusual quality.
3.Which of the following can best describe Tomas?
A.Brave and independent. B.Tough and honest.
C.Talented and persistent. D.Kind and hard-working.
4.What can we know about the immigrants from the text?
A.They are ashamed of their roots.
B.They feel attached to their family.
C.They can’t fit in with the new surroundings.
D.They are less interested in recent generations.
At one time or another in your life you have probably done origami, even if it was just making a paper airplane or something more complicated like a paper crane. The chances are that as you did it, you reflected on how inventive this traditional art is. Animals, boxes, flowers, boats: it all can be created from a single square or rectangular sheet of paper simply by folding it. No cutting, no pasting.
But did you ever stop to think how the same techniques might be applied to engineering? Equipment that could be of real practical use? Origami meets the demand for things that need to be small when transported and large when they arrive, like the everyday umbrella. In fact, origami-inspired creations have already flown in space; in 1995, Japanese engineers launched a satellite with solar panels that folded like a map.
“It’s now mathematically proven that you can pretty much fold anything,” says physicist Robert J. Lang, who quit his engineering job eight years ago to fold things full time. Lang, an origami enthusiast since age six, advised a advised well-known ear manufacturer the best way to fold an airbag into a dashboard. He is currently working on a space telescope lens that, if all goes according to plan, should be able to unfold to the size of a football field.
At the other end of the scale, researchers are also working on tiny folding devices that could lead to breakthroughs in medicine and computing. There’s no doubt that computers of the future may contain tiny, folded motors or capacitors for faster processing and better memory.
Applications for origami engineering go further than many of us might imagine. “Some day,” says MIT’s Erik Demaine, “we’ll build reconfigurable (可重构的) robots that can fold on their own from one thing into another, like Transformers. Too much like science fiction to be true? Maybe—though you certainly wouldn’t want to bet against it.”
1.What do we know about origami?
A.It consumes lots of time. B.It involves interesting ideas.
C.It requires complex techniques. D.It has to do with cutting and pasting.
2.Which of the following is an application of origami?
A.A space telescope lens can be folded to the size of an umbrella.
B.A satellite is equipped with solar panels and a folded map.
C.An airbag can be better folded into a dashboard of a car.
D.A future computer contains many huge folded motors.
3.What is Erik Demaine’s attitude towards origami engineering?
A.Hopeful B.Doubtful.
C.Disapproving. D.Ambiguous.
4.In which section of a newspaper may this text appear?
A.Entertainment. B.Culture.
C.Education. D.Pop-science.
