Question

假如你是李华，你班开展主题“不忘初心，牢记使命”演讲比赛。请你就以下要点，结合自身的经历写一篇讲稿，谈谈自己的理解。

内容要点如下:

1.你的“初心”:

2.选择此“初心”的原因或意义；

3.如何实现

注意:

1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节.以使行文连贯；

3.参考词汇:不忘初心:remain true to our original aspirations／never forget why we started

Dear classmates,

It is my honour to be here and share with you my idea on this topic.

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Thank you!

Answer

Dear classmates,

It is my honor to be here and share with you my idea on this topic. President Xi delivered a speech with a topic “Never forget why you started, and your mission can be accomplished.”

While reading it, I keep thinking about my original aspiration---to get all the necessary knowledge and skills to study in my dream university. With knowledge and skills acquired in such a university , I will play a more active and visible role in contributing to my country, making it better. I know there's still a long way to go before I realize my aspiration. But I will follow my teachers' instructions, and never give up when confronted with discouraging setbacks and obstacles.

I hope we can remain true to our original aspirations and keep them in mind.

Thank you!

【解析】

这是一篇应用文写作。文章要求写一篇演讲稿。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇演讲稿；根据文章要求，需写主题为“不忘初心，牢记使命”的演讲稿。内容包括自己的“初心”、选择“初心”的原因和意义。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：remain true to our original aspirations／never forget why we started（不忘初心），original aspiration（初心），With knowledge and skills acquired（with+宾语+过去分词作宾补），contribute to（对……做贡献）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）连词成句，需注意文章中描述自己的“初心”可用一般现在时，而在描写如何实现自己的“初心”时可用一般将来时。

第4步：连句成文，可使用连词对文章进行润色，要按照题目要求进行内容安排，采用三段式的结构，全篇书写要清晰、规范、不得有涂改、书写错误等。