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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Hello, everyone. It's nice to speak about that we can do for our school, and I think small actions can make big difference. The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautifully. Every one of them may plant a tree in the school or to organize a thorough cleaning on the campus. We can also form a good habit of putting rubbishes into trashcans. Never forget to turn off the lights and close the doors. We should not leave the tap water run or waste any materials in the laboratory class. In that case, I believe we'll turn our school in a better place to study and live in. How I wish we can enjoy a better school life!

Thank you for listening!

 

that→what make后加a beautifully→beautiful them→us 去掉organize前的to rubbishes→rubbish and→or run→running in→into can→could 【解析】 这是一篇说明文。主要为作者对如何创造一个更好的校园而提出自己的观点。 第一处:考查连接词。句意:很高兴能谈谈我们能为学校做些什么,我认为小的行动也能带来大的不同。根据分析about后面为宾语从句,从句中缺少宾语,表示“做些什么”, 应使用what引导,而that为从属连词,不充当成分无实意。故that改为what。 第二处:考查固定短语。句意:很高兴能谈谈我们能为学校做些什么,我认为小的行动也能带来大的不同。固定短语make a big difference表示“对……有很大的影响,对……很重要”。故make后加a。 第三处:考查形容词。句意:我们能做的第一件事是使我们的校园更美丽。此处用形容词作宾语补足语,make our campus more beautiful意思是“让我们的校园更美丽”。故beautifully改为beautiful。 第四处:考查代词。句意:我们每个人都可以在学校种一棵树或组织一次彻底的校园大扫除。根据上一句可知是“我们”,再根据句意可知,这句话所要表达的意思是“我们每个人可以在学校里种植一棵树”。故them改为us。 第五处:考查动词形式。句意:我们每个人都可以在学校种一棵树或组织一次彻底的校园大扫除。根据上文选择连词or可知此处承前省略了情态动词may,因此to多余。故去掉organize前的to。 第六处:考查名词。句意:我们也可以养成把垃圾放入垃圾桶的好习惯。名词rubbish为不可数名词,没有复数形式。故rubbishes改为rubbish。 第七处:考查连词。句意:永远不要忘记关灯或关门。根据本句句意及逻辑关系可知,turn off the lights和close the doors为选择关系应用or。故and改为or。 第八处:考查非谓语动词。句意:我们不应该让自来水一直开着,也不应该浪费实验课上的任何材料。此处考查leave+宾语+宾语补足语,由于the tap water与run为主动关系,因此用现在分词running,leave the tap water running意思是“让自来水一直流着”。故run改为running。 第九处:考查介词。句意:如果那样的话,我相信我们会把我们的学校变成一个更好的学习和生活的地方。固定短语turn sth. into“将……变成”,故in改为into。 第十处:考查情态动词。句意:我多么希望我们能享受一个更好的学校生活! wish 后接宾语从句时,从句谓语通常要用虚拟语气:若表示与将来事实相反,用could / would+ / might+动词原形。故can改为could。
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14.A.safety B.health C.independence D.future

15.A.family B.society C.country D.company

16.A.as if B.only if C.what if D.even if

17.A.precious B.necessary C.admirable D.positive

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A.Because people tend to center themselves. B.Because everyone lacks empathy.

C.Because empathy is a strange quality. D.Because it's better to give than to receive.

2.Which situation can empathy be used in?

A.When a mathematician is calculating the area of a farmland.

B.When a teacher is comforting a student about his failure in exams.

C.When a criminal is cheating a victim.

D.When a dancer is dancing to music.

3.What does the underlined sentence "An empty jug cannot fill a cup" mean?

A.An empty jug is too small to hold a cup.

B.It's a must to talk to kids about emotions.

C.Adults should set an example to kids.

D.Kids give empathy with their emotional needs met first.

4.What is the main topic of the passage?

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D.Whether kids can be trained to be more empathetic.

 

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