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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分

I like travelling and my dream of visiting Beijing, the capital city of our country, come true during the National Day holidays this year. My mother booked an one-day tour for me. On the morning of October 1st I went to Tian’anmen Square with one of my classmates , there we watched the flag-raising ceremony. As I watched the flag rising slowly, I sang the national anthem, feeling extreme proud. Several hours later, a grand military parade was held mark the People's Republic of China's 70th founding anniversary. In the afternoon we decided to go to other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. When we reached the destination, it was crowded with tourists. I was glad for which those volunteers had done for little kids and elderly people . Standing on the Great wall, we couldn’t help admire the splendid scenery. This travelling, with doubt, meant a lot of to me.

 

come→came an→a there→where extreme→extremely held后面加上to attraction→attractions which→what admire→admiring with→without 删除lot后的of 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者今年国庆节去天安门观看升旗仪式和阅兵式以及参观一些景点的经过和感想。 1. 考查时态。结合上下文可知作者梦想“实现”的动作发生在过去,故用一般过去时,故将come改为came。 2. 考查冠词。结合句意此处应译为“一个为期一天的旅行”,故应用不定冠词表示泛指,又one是辅音音素开头,应用a,故将an改为a。 3. 考查定语从句。分析句子可知此处是非限制性定语从句,先行词Tian’anmen Square在从句中充当地点状语,故应用关系副词where,故将there改为where。 4. 考查副词。此处应用副词修饰形容词proud,故将extreme改为extremely。 5. 考查非谓语动词。分析句子可知此处应用非谓语动词,再结合句意“举行阅兵式来庆祝中华人民共和国成立70周年”可知此处表目的,应用不定式,故在held后加to。 6. 考查名词的数。根据other(其他的)判断此处应用名词复数形式,故将attraction改为attractions。 7. 考查宾语从句连接词。分析句子可知for后是宾语从句,从句缺少宾语,故应用连接代词what,故将which改为what。 8. 考查固定短语。此处考查短语can’t help doing sth情不自禁做某事,故将admire改为admiring。 9. 考查介词。句意:毫无疑问这次旅行对我意义重大。结合句意可知此处应译为“毫无疑问”,“没有”是without,故将with改为without。 10. 考查介词。修饰动词meant应用a lot(非常),故删除lot后的of。
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