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We have a pit bull (比特犬). We found him a few weeks ago, walking along the road in a rural area. He jumping on cars, we thought maybe his family was camping somewhere nearby, so we passed him by. A few hours later, on our return trip, he was still in the same place, again, trying to get folks to stop for him. When he saw us, he laid down in the middle of the road, so we were unable to get around him.

We stopped the car and looked around for a few minutes, trying to figure out if anyone was around from whom he was separated. It didn’t appear so. Then, we took a good look at the dog. He had no collar and he was really thin. We decided he was abandoned.

My husband said, “If he doesn’t bite me when I try to pick him up to put him in the car, then we have a new dog.” The dog happily joined us with no fight at all. The only thing we were in danger of was getting licked to death. He kept sticking his head between the two front seats and thanking us for picking him up.

The dog was clearly on the road for some time. He was extremely under weight. He was covered in scars and new wounds. We have guessed that some of the scars were from when he was on the road. We thought of possible fights with coyotes, but he also looked as though he was used to fighting other dogs. We figured his incredibly sweet personality was the reason he was abandoned. He can’t have been a good fighting dog.

Therefore, we fed him a lot over the course of the next two weeks and he gained over twenty pounds.

注意：

1. 所续写短文(两部分共计)的词数应为150左右；

2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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We took him to the vet.

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Now we all love the dog very much. He once helped save me from trouble.

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Answer

We took him to the vet, who said the dog appears to be in good health, despite his having been abandoned. He figured out the dog is about two or three years of age, from the condition of his teeth. Then the vet gave him all the required shots and applied some medicine to the scars and new wounds. About a month later, the dog changed into a strong and lovely one. He is both sweet and gentle.

Now we all love the dog very much. He once helped save me from trouble. One day my husband went to work in a hurry, forgetting to turn off the gas. I was sleeping soundly when I heard the dog barking like crazy. I was woken up, realizing something unusual must have happened in our house. It turned out that the house was filled with gas, which made me in danger. I owed it to the dog that I avoided a disaster. Since then, the pit bull has become a member of our family.

【解析】

这是一篇读后续写。

通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了作者在一个乡下捡到了一条斗牛犬，体重很轻浑身是伤疤和新伤口。正在作者把狗带回家后的接下来的两个星期里，它长了20多磅。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：我们带他去看兽医。所以后文应该是讲述去看兽医的情况，兽医说狗很健康，并给他的伤疤和新伤口涂了一些药。第二段开头是：现在我们都很爱狗。他曾帮助我摆脱困境。本段应该写这条狗是如何帮助作者摆脱困境的。和在此之后，狗成为了作者家的一员。

续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。