Question

    A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.

On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.

The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked: “Are these yours?” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly(胆怯地).” Have you killed the man?” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. ”When did you see the dead man?” ”About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man?” “No, Sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet?” ”No, Sir.’ The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and send him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.

注意：

1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again.

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The farmer was lucky. A few days later,

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Answer

Paragraph 1

The officer was so angry that he asked the policeman to beat him up again. The farmer was very afraid, he thought he would be sentenced to death by killing people, but he didn’t, he was innocent. He must tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice. he hoped that someone could come and save him.

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The farmer was lucky .A few days later, a young man came to the police station with a lot of journalists, saying that he saw the murderer. It was the police officer who killed the man on the snow! He saw the police office used a knife killing the man late in the evening. he was so frightened and ran away. But the young man thought the farmer was innocent. So he took the great courage to expose the real criminal. After the investigation, the young man was right. The police officer was sent into prison and the policeman who beat up the farmer was fired, and the brave young man was regarded as the hero by the villagers.

【解析】

本文属于读后续写。

本文主要讲了一位农民为了给自己妻子买药治病，卖了自己的蔬菜。在回家的路上，他看到一个人躺在路边，便好心想扶他起来，结果发现那是一个浑身沾满血的死人，由于害怕他扔掉篮子就跑，不想却被法官冤枉成为凶手。读后续写以读为辅，以写为主，其目标是考查学生的书面语言运用能力。从评分标准来看，读后续写主要是考查内容和语言两方面。在内容上，第一，续写内容要与原文和所给续写段落的首句融洽，续写的每一段要与原文融洽度高，并且要紧贴所给首句的线索来写。第二，内容要丰富，要有细节的描绘，使用5个及以上原文中画线的词语。这两方面对学生续写内容给出了极强的限制，使得学生的续写内容偏离原文的概率大大降低。同时，内容也会被限制在可以预测的范围内，便于评分。在语言方面，考生应该首先考虑语法和词汇的准确性，然后再去考虑复杂性。有的考生直接将简单句合并或者修改成复杂句，这在平时练习中作为学习过程是可行的，但考试时，却可能因此出现语法或词汇错误，得不偿失。第二点是上下文的连贯性，实际上应该是语句间的连接手段的使用，例如，“and”“but”“therefore”等词，但必须指出的是，衔接词使用要恰当，并非越多越好，连贯主要靠上下文的情节推进来实现。