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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中

最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在 缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。 修改:在错的词下画横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。

Not only does our parents give us life but they give us endless love and support and always share our happy and sorrow. I’m very grateful for my parents who give me so much love and spare no effort to support me. I still remember once I was seriously ill, they were so worrying and almost keep me company the whole night. Now I’m in Senior 2. Happily enough my parents can understand my stressful condition but often encourage me. Therefore, they give me enough personal space which I appreciate it so much. How I should do now is studying hard. When I grow up I will try my best to make my parents live happy life.

 

第一处:does → do 第二处:happy → happiness 第三处:for → to 第四处:worrying → worried 第五处:keep → kept 第六处:but → and 第七处:Therefore → Besides/moreover/Furthermore 第八处:去掉it 第九处:How → What 第十处:happy前加a 【解析】 我们的父母不仅给了我们生命,而且给了我们无尽的爱和支持,并且永远分享我们的快乐和悲伤。长大后我们要让父母过上幸福的生活。 1.考查主谓一致。Not only位于句子开头,句子用部分倒装,而句子主语是our parents,故把does改成do。 2.考查名词。句意:分享我们的幸福和痛苦。our是形容词性物主代词,修饰名词,故答案为happiness。 3.考查固定搭配。be grateful to sb.对某人感激,故把for改成to。 4.考查形容词。句意:我仍然记得有一次我病得很重,他们很担心,几乎整晚都陪伴着我。be worried担忧的,故把worrying改成worried。 5.考查时态。句意:我仍然记得有一次我病得很重,他们很担心,几乎整晚都陪伴着我。根据once(曾经)可知从句用一般过去时态,此处是并列的谓语动词,故把keep改成kept。 6.考查并列连词。句意:足够高兴地是,我的父母能够理解我的压力,并经常鼓励我。此处是递进的并列关系而不是转折关系,故把but改成and。 7.考查连词。句意:此外,他们给了我足够的个人空间,我非常感激。根据与上文联系可知此处表示递进关系,故把Therefore改成Besides/moreover/Furthermore。 8.考查定语从句。句意:此外,他们给了我足够的个人空间,我非常感激。此句中space是先行词,在后面的定语从句中做宾语,所以定语从句中的it是多余的,故去掉it。 9.考查主语从句。在How I should do now is studying hard.中句子没有主语,所以应该用主语从句充当主语,而主语从句中的谓语动词do是及物动词,要带宾语,引导主语从句的词要起双重作用,故把How改成What。 10.考查不定冠词。句意:当我长大了我要尽力让我的父母过上一个幸福的生活。live a---life,过上一个---的生活。故在happy前加a。
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