Question

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack刚刚升入高中，但他一时无法适应新的校园生活，写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封建议信，内容主要包括：

1.实际上很多新生对于高中生活感到困惑，因此不必过多担心；

2.建议：

（1）报名参加课外活动，这有助于结交更多的新朋友；

（2）制作好学习日程安排，要特别关注学习，因为作为一名青少年，学习好是我们的责任。

3.希望建议能适合你。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Jack,

I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life. Actually, many freshmen are confused about high school life, so there is no need to worry about it too much. I’m writing to offer you some useful suggestions.

First，I suggest that you sign up for extra-curricular activities, which can help you make more new friends. In this way you won’t feel lonely and your school life will be come colorful and interesting. Second, you should make a good schedule and focus on improving your study. As a teenager, it is our responsibility to study well.

I hope my suggestions will be of great help you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文, 写一封建议信，关于如何适应新的校园生活给笔友提出建议。。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文 建议信

时态：一般现在时和一般将来时

结构：分三部分，第一部分写信目的：提出建议；第二部分建议的具体内容；第三部分希望接受建议。

要点：

1.写信目的：很多新生对于高中生活感到困惑，因此不必过多担心，想关于他的问题提出建议。

2.建议内容：

（1）报名参加课外活动

（2）结交更多的新朋友；

（3）制作好学习日程安排

（4）要关注学习

3.希望建议有帮助，并能接受建议。

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语 ）

have trouble (in) doing ….; adjust to ； be confused about ; worry about ; offer some advice; recommend ; sign up for; make new friends; make a good schedule; focus on ;

be helpful to ; accept one’s suggestions

第三步：连词成句

（1）Many freshmen are confused about high school life.

（2）There is no need to worry about it too much.

（3）I’m writing to offer you some useful advice.

（4）I suggest that you sign up for extra-curricular activities .

（5）It can help you make more new friends.

（6）Your school life will become colorful and interesting.

（7）You should make a good schedule to improve your study.

（8）I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、过渡词)

用so、therefore 连接（1）（2）句

Many freshmen are confused about high school life. Therefore，there is no need to worry about it too much.

用句型It is suggested that 改写（4）句

It is suggested that you sign up for extra-curricular activities .

用定语从句连接（4）（5）句

It is suggested that you sign up for extra-curricular activities，which can help you make more new friends.

用插入语most importantly过渡（7）句

Most importantly , you should make a good schedule to improve your study.

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，适当运用复杂句式增加句子的可读性。