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一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”,请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文...

一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”,请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。

1.家庭:

2.工作:

3.业余生活。

注意:1.词数100左右:

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:

3.开头语已为你写好。

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future._______________________________

__________________________________________________________________________

 

One possible version: I often imagine what my life would be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I’will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful. 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于半开放性作文。要求考生以“十年后的我”为题,写一篇征文。 本文的话题是“十年后的我”,要求考生从家庭、工作和业余生活来想象十年以后的自己。文章应该使用一般将来时和第一人称。因为提示信息较少,所以要充分发挥想象,增加适当的细节以使行文连贯,充实内容。比如可以联想到的内容有健身,度假,聚会等等。在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词,插入语以使文章层次分明,使用多种句式结构和高级词汇亮点来提高文章的档次,如定语从句,宾语从句和状语从句等。此外,因为是畅想未来,所以要用一般将来时。 【亮点说明】 本篇范文短小精悍,要点全面,语言简练,时态人称准确,很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目,提出自己对未来的畅想,然后从生活,工作,家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语,避免了文章句式的单一。此外,还用到了较多的高级语法表达,如I hope I'll work in a computer company as a program designer.(省略that的宾语从句)I'll do a good job in whatever I do.(whatever引导的宾语从句)In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.(比较级+and+比较级连用)等,这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。  
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

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3.A. lacked    B. spotted    C. possessed    D. admired

4.A. major    B. project    C. composition    D. instrument

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10.A. jumped at    B. turned down    C. waited for    D. opened up

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14.A. scholarship    B. sponsor    C. degree    D. assistant

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17.A. students    B. audience    C. spotlights    D. platform

18.A. obviously    B. desperately    C. appropriately    D. anxiously

19.A. booming    B. pleasing    C. awful    D. powerful

20.A. everything    B. something    C. everybody    D. somebody

 

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2.

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Put kids to bed early.

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A.food shortages in the 1840s led to a decrease in population

B.people are moving to the cities for lack of work in the countryside

C.it is harder to make a living as a farmer than as a factory worker

D.different kinds of old Irish songs are all sung with instruments

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