Question

假定你是李华，是一名高二学生。你发现很多同学晚上学习到很晚，他们边学习边吃零食，第二天早上却由于起床太晚而不吃早餐,导致上午学习时昏昏欲睡。你感觉这样对身体有害。请你根据这种现象，给«英语周报»写一封信，反映上述情况，并谈谈自己的看法。

注意：1.词数： 100词左右。已给出的开头不计入词数。

2. 可根据实际需要，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：零食：snack

Dear Editor,

I’m a high school student who has just entered Grade Two .

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Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Editor,

I’m a high school student who has just entered Grade Two. I have found that some students in my class work harder than before. They often stay up late into the night, eating snacks , which, of course, is bad for their health. And some students find it difficult to get up early the next morning, so they have to go to class without breakfast .Meanwhile,they feel sleepy the whole morning.This is also a bad habit that does harm to their health.

In my point of view, important as studies are, health should also be taken seriously. Not only should we keep a healthy diet, but we should also balance our studies and relaxation. Only in this way can we keep fit and make progress in our studies as well.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信

第一步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信；假定你是李华，是一名高二学生。你发现很多同学晚上学习到很晚，他们边学习边吃零食，第二天早上却由于起床太晚而不吃早餐,导致上午学习时昏昏欲睡。你感觉这样对身体有害。请你根据这种现象，给«英语周报»写一封信，反映上述情况，并谈谈自己的看法。

时态应为一般现在时。

第二步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：stay up late(熬夜)，eat snacks（吃零食），feel sleepy（昏昏欲睡），do harm to sth(对...有害)；sth be taken seriously(被认真对待)，make progress(取得进步)等。

第三步：根据提示或关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致、时态等问题。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的过渡和衔接，使文章读起来自然流畅。书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面整洁美观。