Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处， 多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last year, Zhang Pingyu paid visit to London. Worried about the time available, Zhang Pingyu had made a list of the site she wanted to see. It was the Tower which she visited first. Fancy! This solid stone, square tower had been remained standing for one thousand years. Many new buildings had expanded around it. Therefore, it was still part of a royal palace and prison combined. There followed St Paul’s Cathedral built after the terrible fire of London in 1666. It looked splendidly when first built. Westminster Abbey, too, was very interesting. Then just as he came out of the abbey, Pingyu heard the famous sound of the clock Big Ben, ring out the hour.

The next day Pingyu was leaving London to Windsor Castle. “Perhaps I will see the Queen？” she wondered as she fall asleep.

Answer

paid后加a

site →sites

which →that

去掉been

Therefore →However

splendidly →splendid

he →she

ring →ringing

to →for

fall→fell

【解析】

本文属于记叙文，描述了张苹玉游览英国伦敦的日程安排。

第一处：考查冠词。句意：去年，张平雨去参观了伦敦。本句为短语pay a visit to 拜访，故在paid后加a。

第二处：考查名词。句意：担心时间有限，她列了一个想去参观的景点的清单。site为可数名词，一个景点的清单，可知用复数形式，故把site改为sites。

第三处：考查强调句。句意：她参观的第一个地方就是伦敦塔。本句为强调句，对the tower进行强调，故把which改为that。

第四处：考查动词语态。句意：这座坚固和石头砌成的塔矗立了一千年。分析句子可知，remain为系动词，无被动语态，故去掉been。

第五处：考查副词。句意：但是，伦敦塔依然是皇宫与监狱共用的地方。分析句子可知，前后句为转折关系，故把Therefore改为However。

第六处：考查形容词。句意：最初修建好的时候，看起来非常雄伟。look为系动词，后接形容词作表语，故把splendidly改为splendid。

第七处：考查代词。句意：当她从大教堂出来的时候，听到了大本钟报时的钟声。根据前文可知，张平雨为女性，故把he改为she。

第八处：考查非谓语动词。句意：当她从大教堂出来的时候，听到了大本钟报时的钟声。分析句子可知，ring为非谓语动词，作状语，与clock为主谓关系，故用现在分词形式，故把ring改为ringing。

第九处：考查介词。句意：第二天，她离开伦敦去温莎城堡。本句为leave for 动身去，故把to改为for。

第十处：考查动词时态。句意：她想着想着睡着了。本文讲述过去的事情，故用一般过去时，故把fall改为fell。