Question

假如你是李华，请给你的外国朋友 Tom 写一封信，给他提一些汉语学习方面的好建议并陈述理由。 要点如下：1. 培养兴趣 2. 多阅读 3. 看中文电影

注意：1. 词数100词左右（信的开头和结尾已经给出，并不计入总词数）；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Tom,

As for the good ways to learn Chinese well, my suggestions are as follows.

First and foremost, be interested in what you are learning. As we all know, interest is the best teacher. If you have an interest in something, it’s easier for you to pay attention to it for a long time. In addition, it’s also a good idea to read more Chinese books. This is because you can learn many new words while reading. Last but not least, you can try to improve your Chinese by watching Chinese movies as well, which will help you to improve your listening and speaking skills.

I hope you can take my advice into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇上面表达属于应用文——建议信的写作。要求考生写一封信，给外国朋友 Tom提一些汉语学习方面的好建议并陈述理由。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文——建议信

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

人称：第二人称

结构：总分法。先总说自己有建议，再分说具体的建议。最后提出期望。

要求：1.学习汉语有很多方法，表达自己的建议。

2.分说具体建议

1）培养兴趣（develop an interest）

2）多阅读（reading more about Chinese）

3) 看中文电影（watch Chinese movies）

3.期待能考虑我的建议。（hope to take these suggestions into consideration）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

as follows, be interested in, develop an interest in, read more Chinese books, gain much knowledge, improve Chinese, watch Chinese movies, improve listening and speaking skills

第三步：连词成句

My suggestions are as follows.

It’s a good idea to read more Chinese books.

You can learn many new words while reading.

You can try to improve your Chinese by watching Chinese movies.

It will help you to improve your listening and speaking skills.

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First and foremost, in addition, last but not least

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改