Question

Directions:  Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假设你是明启中学高三学生李青，将在主题为“我的家乡变美了”的班会上发言。请撰写一篇演讲稿，内容必须包括：

▪ 家乡变美了的具体表现；

▪ 你对家乡未来的畅想。

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Answer

As is known to all, with the deepening of the reform and opening-up policy and the development of the era, earth-shaking changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years, for example, the road becomes wider and wider, a lot of tall buildings have been built, and the government has put up a dozen of big squares and parks, which make people’s amateur life get enriched. In addition, people now pay more attention to environmental protection, leading to the better environment, and, more importantly, people's living standards have been improved, which has greatly increased the people's happiness.

I believe that with the joint efforts of all walks of life, the future of my hometown is sure to become more beautiful

【解析】

本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求写一篇演讲稿。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一篇演讲稿，内容必须包括：▪ 家乡变美了的具体表现；▪ 你对家乡未来的畅想。 时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； earth-shaking（翻天覆地的），development（发展），deepening（深入），the reform and opening-up policy（改革开放）， change（变化），improve（提高）及environmental protection（环境保护）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。