Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

In order to enrich our school life and promote our English learning, the English teachers of Grade II organized an English Talent show last Friday afternoon. Despite of the fact that we were busy with our study, we took active part in it.

The show lasted more than two hours and it was a great success. Different forms of English programs ranged from singing, dancing, short plays, musical plays to English dubbing performances were displayed, which offers us a great visual feast. There were lots of excitement and cheers during the whole process. That impressed us most was the play Snow White. This activity was warmly welcomed by we students, all of which considered it helped to arouse our learning interest. It is suggested that such activities could be held more regular so that we can really combine learning with joy and develop our learning potential.

Answer

1. Despite of–Despite

2. took后面加an

3. ranged-ranging

4.offers—offered

5.There were – There was

6. That—What

7.we– us

8.which- whom

9. could – should / 删去could

10. regular – regularly

【解析】

本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了英语老师举办了一场英语才艺表演，同学们表演了各种各样的节目，大家都认为这有助于激发我们的学习兴趣并建议以后多多举行这样的活动。

第一处：考查despite的用法。句意：尽管学习很忙，我们还是积极参加了。despite表示“尽管”，of是多余的，故删掉of。

第二处：考查冠词。句意参考上题解析，take part in短语中，如果part前有形容词修饰时，通常要加不定冠词，active以元音音素开头，故在took后面加an。

第三处：考查非谓语动词。句意：从唱歌、跳舞、短剧、音乐剧到英语配音等各种形式的英语节目给我们带来了一场视觉盛宴。Different forms of English programs 与range之间是逻辑上的主谓关系，表示主动，用现在分词作定语，故ranged改为ranging。

第四处：考查时态。句意参考上题解析，事情发生在过去，应该用一般过去时，故offers改为offered。

第五处：考查主谓一致。句意：整个过程充满了兴奋和欢呼。根据就近原则，there be句型中be用单数还是复数由后面接近的一项的单复数决定，excitement是不可数名词，故were 改为was。

第六处：考查主语从句。句意：令我印象最深的是戏剧《白雪公主》。此处为主语从句，从句中缺少主语，故That改为What。

第七处：考查代词。句意：这次活动受到了我们学生的热烈欢迎，大家都认为这有助于激发我们的学习兴趣。作介词by的宾语应该用宾格，故we改为us。

第八处：考查非限定性定语从句。句意参考上题解析，此处为非限定性定语从句，关系词指代先行词students 在从句中作of的宾语，故which改为whom。

第九处：考查虚拟语气。句意：大家建议这样的活动可以定期举行，这样我们才能真正把学习和娱乐结合起来，开发我们的潜力。在it is suggested that（建议……）句型中，that引导的主语从句通常用should+动词原形的虚拟语气，其中should可以省略，故could 改为 should或删掉could。

第十处：考查副词。句意参考上题解析，修饰动词held用副词，故regular 改为 regularly。