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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线(),并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分;

3. 格式错误本题零分。

Last Saturday I took bike trip to the nature park together with three of my friends in the breeze(微风), there we went for sighting. In the forest, we saw a number of plant and knew a lot about them. And then we go to a patch of grass that was full of wild flowers. We lay in the sun quietly, enjoyed the fresh air. The sight was very beautiful that we didn’t want to leave. We talked about our experiences happy and played several childhood games. Later, we had photos taken together and rode back to home. It was really an unforgettable weekend because they learned a lot about plants. With addition, we relaxed ourselves by enjoying the beauty of nature.

 

1. took 后添加a 2. there→where; 3. plant→plants; 4. go→went; 5. enjoyed→enjoying/ and enjoyed; 6.very→so; 7. happy→happily; 8. 去掉to; 9. they→we; 10. With→In 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。主要记叙了作者上周六和三个朋友去自然公园玩的经历。 1.考查冠词。句意:上个星期六,我和三个朋友骑自行车去了自然公园,在微风中,我们去看了风景。trip为可数名词,此处表示泛指“一次旅行”应用不定冠词,且bike为辅音音素开头单词,故应用不定冠词a。故took后添加a。 2.考查连词。句意同上。此处为定语从句修饰先行词the nature park,且先行词在从句中做地点状语应用关系副词where。故there改为where。 3.考查名词的数。句意:在森林里,我们看到了许多植物,对它们了解很多。a number of“许多”后跟名词复数形式,plant为可数名词,故plant改为plants。 4.考查动词时态。句意:然后我们去了一片长满野花的草地。结合上文可知描述的是过去发生的事情应用一般过去时。故go改为went。 5.考查非谓语动词或连词。句意:我们静静地躺在阳光下,享受着新鲜的空气。分析句子结构可知enjoy在句中做非谓语动词,与逻辑主语we构成主动关系故用现在分词,故enjoyed改为enjoying;或改写为并列句,在enjoyed前添加and。 6.考查副词。句意:这景色太美了,我们都不想离开。beautiful为形容词需要副词修饰,此处为句型so…that…“如此……以至于”引导结果状语从句。故very改为so。 7.考查副词。句意:我们愉快地谈论我们的经历,玩了几个童年的游戏。修饰动词talk应用副词形式,故happy改为happily。 8.考查介词。句意:后来,我们一起照了相,然后骑车回家。短语back home“回家”中间不需要介词。故去掉to。 9.考查代词。句意:这真是一个难忘的周末,因为我们学到了很多关于植物的知识。文章描述的是作者和朋友们的事情,为第一人称。故they改为we。 10.考查介词。句意:此外,我们放松自己享受自然之美。短语in addition“此外;另外”,故With改为In。  
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