Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 （∧） ，并在其下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线 （\） 划掉．

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．

2． 只允许修改10处，多者 （从第11处起） 不计分．

My grandpa is a retired teacher． He used to teaching in the school of his village． At that time he was only teacher in the school which taught all the grades all the subjects． He worked there for nearly forty years． He was so busy that he hardly had time for his families． During those years， grandpa was willing devoted to his work． Since his retirement， great changes have been taken place in his village but a new school building has been completed． Today the students will move into the new building． For the invitation of the school， grandpa will give a talk to the teachers and students as a guest of honor． Grandpa is exciting about it． He will give a gift to the school， which is a name list of all the students he teaches．

Answer

1． teaching→teach

2． only前加the

3． which→that/who

4． families→family

5． willing→willingly

6．去掉 been

7． but→and

8． For→At

9． exciting→excited

10． teachers→taught

【解析】

本文主要讲了爷爷是一位退休教师，他教了接近四十年的学，期间他忠于他的工作。他退休以后，应学校邀请，以贵宾的身份向师生们讲话，还把他教过的学生名单赠送给学校。

1．考查不定式。used to do sth．意为"过去常常做某事"，这里to是不定式符号，不是介词。故把teaching改为teach。

2．考查冠词。句意：当时，他是学校里唯一一位教所有年级所有科目的老师，此处用定冠词the表示特指。

3．考查定语从句引导词。这里是一个定语从句，先行词是only teacher ，且从句中缺少主语，因此用关系代词who/that来引导。故把which改为that/who。

4．考查名词单复数。句意：他如此忙，很少有时间给他的家人，his family在这里意为"她的家人"。故把families改为family。

5．考查副词。这里用副词修饰was devoted to。故把willing改为willingly。

6．考查语态。句意：自从他退休，他的村庄发生了巨大的变化，take place"发生"，是不及物动词短语，无被动。故把been去掉。

7．考查连词。结合语境可知前后句子之间是并列关系，因此用and。故把but改为and。

8．考查介词。句意：应学校邀请，爷爷将以贵宾的身份向师生们讲话，at the invitation of…意为"应…邀请"。故把For改为At。

9．考查形容词。句意：爷爷对此很激动，此处修饰人，因此要用excited。故把exciting改为excited。

10．考查时态。此处说的是他教过的学生的名单，由此可知一般过去时。故把teachers改为taught。