Question

假设你是高三学生李华，想向心仪的大学投一份申请书。申请到该校攻读本科。请你给该校写一封申请书，推荐自己被录取。

注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Sir or Madam,

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Best wishes!

Sincerely yours,

Lihua

Answer

Dear Sir or Madam，

I would like to apply for the admission to your university as a bachelor's student majoring in English. I'm in senior three and will receive a high school diploma next June. It has long been my dream to further my study in your English department, which has establish a good reputation across the country. During my high school years, I've entered quite a few English competitions and won a couple of prizes. My academic performance ranks top. I'm confident that I am qualified.

Thank you for your consideration and look forward to your early reply soon.

Best wishes

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一封申请信。从题干中我们可以得知一些申请的信息，但是比较简单，同学们写作时需要结合自己的学习状况适当发挥，使得写作内容饱满。

第1步：审题。确定时态。由于本文是要求同学们自己写一封申请书，所以文章时态应以一般现在时、现在完成时为主。人称以第一人称为主。

第2步：确定文章框架和内容。信件可分为两段，第一段主要讲述自己在学习方面取得的成就以及学习潜力，第二段期待答复。

第3步：确定关键词（组）。 “apply for申请”，“the admission to your university你大学的职位”，“major in主修”，“a high school diploma高中文凭”，“further my study继续我的学业”“establish a good reputation树立良好声誉”“academic performance学业表现”等。

第4步：对写作要点遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第5步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。