Question

假如你是李华，高一第一学期的生活即将结束，请按以下提示，给你的英国好友Wilson写一封e-mail，讲一讲你的高中生活。内容包括：

1.师生关系;

2.学习情况;

3.老师及教学评价;

4.今后的打算。

注意：

1.词数100左右;

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Dear Wilson,

How time flies!

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Wilson.

How time flies! I’m glad to share my first year of senior high school life with you.

Generally speaking, I have got used to it, and have developed the way of learning. I have a good relationship with my teachers and classmates, who are always ready to offer help, so that I have made much progress during the first term. For instance, maths and English are two examples to show my progress.

I’m lucky to meet so many excellent teachers with rich teaching experience and good teaching methods. As for my future plan, I will pay more attention to basic knowledge of every subject. Using my time properly is also important because I have many subjects to deal with.

Thanks for your concern!

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇应用文。给英国好友写一封邮件，讲一讲高中生活。

第一步：根据提示可知，要求同学们给英国好友写一封邮件，话题为学生熟悉的内容，利于同学们的发挥。根据题干要求，同学们写作时应着重叙述自己的高一生活。

第二步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：share with, get used to, have a good relationship with等。

第三步：确定文章结构，本文可以采取三段的写法，第一段乐于与对方分享高中生活往事；第二段介绍高中生活情况；第三段提出对高中生活的感受。

第四步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要用一般现在时。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。