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假定你是Teens 杂志社悄悄话(Secret Words)”的栏目编辑David,刚收到李华的一封求助信(信件内容附后)。请阅信后给他回一封信。内容包括:

1. 感谢对方信任,并表明写信目的;

2. 肯定对方的优点;

3. 回应他的困惑。

注意:1. 词数100左右;

2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear David

I'm Li Hua, a faithful reader of Teens. I'm writing to ask you for help.

I'm under psychological pressure now. To be honest, I'm a motivated boy, so I always expect myself to be perfect in every aspect. But the truth is that I can't always satisfy myself or meet others' expectations. I feel so tired and helpless. What should I do next? Can you help me?

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

 

Dear Li Hua

I'm glad to hear that you are a faithful reader of Teens.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely

David

 

Dear Li Hua, I’m glad to hear that you are a faithful reader of Teens. As an editor in the column of Secret Words, I’m thankful for your trust. I’m writing to give you my humble opinions. Trying to be perfect is nothing too bad. Instead, it’s a valuable virtue you should stick to. However, don’t be too hard on yourself or too critical about yourself. Things do not always take place as planned. What you should do is just try your best. Enjoy the process of achieving goals. Please keep in mind that process is far more important than outcome. I wish my opinions above will be helpful to you. Keep in touch! Yours sincerely, David 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文,写一封建议信。 第一步: 审题: 应用文 建议信 人称:第二、三人称 时态: 一般现在时为主 2、结构: 总分法,分三部分,第一部分表明写信目的——提出建议;第二部分肯定对方的优点,关于对方困惑的问题提出具体建议;第三部分希望建议对对方有帮助 。 要点: 1. 感谢对方对Teens的信任,并表明写信目的——提出建议; 2.提出具体的建议 ①肯定对方的优点; ② 不要对自己太苛责,太吹毛求疵; ③任何事情尽力去做就好,享受实现目标的过程而不是结果; 3.希望建议对对方有帮助。 第二步:列提纲(重点词汇、短语 ) faithful ;be thankful to sb. for…; give one’s opinion; a valuable virtue ; stick to; be hard on ;be critical about ; as planned; try one’s best; achieve the goal; keep in mind; process ; outcome; be helpful to you; keep in touch 第三步:连词成句 1.You are a faithful reader of Teens. 2. I’m thankful for your trust. 3.It’s a valuable virtue you should stick to. 4.Don’t be too hard on yourself . 5.You should just try your best. 6. Process is more important than outcome. 7.I wish my opinions would help you. 根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型,注意时态和主谓一致问题。 第四步:连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇) 用衔接词连接3、4两句 It’s a valuable virtue you should stick to. However , don’t be too hard on yourself . On one hand , it’s a valuable virtue you should stick to. On the other hand, don’t be too hard on yourself . 用表示“建议”的句型表达下句: Don’t be too hard on yourself . →It is suggested that you should not be too hard on yourself . →My suggestion is that you should not be too hard on yourself . →It is my advice that you should not be too hard on yourself . →You are supposed not to be too hard on yourself . 多种句式表达下句 I wish my opinions will help you. →I wish my opinions will be helpful to you. →It is my wish that my opinions will be of great help you. 适当地运用高级词汇、短语、复杂句式提升文章的档次增加文章的可读性。
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