Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I would like to share to you the story about my grandma.

In my teenage years, what impresses me most was the way she said goodbye to me every time I packed different bag and got ready to return to the city after spending a summer at home."Working hard, and don't miss home," she told me at the front door, trying hardly to hold back her own tears.Weak and lonely, my grandma stood against the door, which nearly made me to cry. Then, he walked back into the house hurriedly before I even got into my dad's car. All of sudden, a feeling of guilt struck me. I longed to hug her and say something, and at that moment I was surprising to find myself helplessly silent.

However, there is no possibility that I can hug her now.

Answer

1. to--with

2.impresses-impressed

3.bag---bags

4. Working---Work

5. hardly---hard

6.去掉to

7. he---she

8. All of sudden----加 a

9.and---but

10.surprising---surprised

【解析】

本文是记叙文。讲述了作者对已故奶奶的怀念。

小题1.考查介词。句意：我想要跟你们分享一下我奶奶的故事。和某人分享用share with somebody，故to改为with。

小题2. 考查动词时态。句意：在我青少年时期，让我印象深刻的是和奶奶再见的场景。In my teenage years表示过去发生的动词，故impresses改为impressed。

小题3. 考查名词。句意：我打包各种行李。different后面用名词复数，故bag改为bags。

小题4. 考查动词。句意：努力学习，不要想家。对第二人称所说的话，动词原型开头，这是祈使句，故Working改为Work。

小题5. 考查副词。句意：奶奶尽量在忍住泪水。hardly是几乎不，而文章表示努力做，用hard修饰动词，表示努力，故hardly改为hard。

小题6. 考查动词。句意：奶奶站在门边，看到这个场景让我想要哭。make somebody do 让某人做某事,故去掉to。

小题7. 考查代词。句意：她快速回家。本文都是在讲奶奶，不能用指代男性的代词，故 he改为she。

小题8. 考查冠词。句意：突然，一种内疚感犹然而生。all of a sudden是固定短语表示突然，故sudden前加 a。

小题9. 考查连词。句意：我渴望拥抱奶奶，但是此时我惊讶地发现自己无助的沉默。前后表示转折，故and改为but。

小题10. 考查形容词。句意：我惊讶地发现自己无助的沉默。人做主语，表示感到的形容词用ed形式，故surprising改为surprised。