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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写使之构成一个完整的故事。 Once upon ...

阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写使之构成一个完整的故事。

Once upon a time, two brothers who lived on neighbouring farms fell into conflict. It was the first serious disagreement in forty years of farming side by side, sharing machinery, and trading labour and goods as needed without a hitch.

Then the long cooperation fell apart. It began with small misunderstand and then grew into a major difference, and finally it exploded into an exchange of bitter words followed by weeks of silence.

One morning, there was a knock on John’s door. He opened it to find a man with a carpenter’s toolbox. “I’m looking for a few days’ work,” he said. Perhaps you have few jobs here and there. Could help you?

“Yes,” said John. “I do have a job for you. Look across the small stream at that farm. That’s my neighbor. In fact, it’s my younger brother. Last week there was a meadow (草地) between us and he took  his bulldozer (推土机) there and now there is creek between us. Well, he may have done this to annoy me but I’ll do better. See that pile of wood by the barn (谷仓)? I want you to build a fence—an 8-foot-high fence—so I won’t need to see his place anymore.”

The carpenter said, “I think I understand the situation. Show me the nails and hole-digger and I’ll be able to do a job that pleases you.”

The older brother had to go to the town for supplies, so he helped the carpenter get everything ready and then he left. The carpenter worked hard all that day measuring, sawing and nailing. At sunset when John returned, the carpenter had just finished his job, John’s eyes opened wide and his jaw dropped.

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;

3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;

4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph 1:

There was no fence at all. It was a bridge!

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Paragraph 2:

They turned to see the carpenter lift the toolbox onto his shoulder.

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There was no fence at all. It was a bridge--a bridge stretching from one side of the creek to the other! A fine piece of work — and his younger brother, was coming across, his hand spread out ..“You are quite a fellow to build this bridge after all I’ve said and done.”The brothers stood at each end of the bridge, and then they met in the middle, taking each other's hands. They turned to see the carpenter lift his toolbox on his shoulder. "No, wait! Stay a few days,please. I've a lot of other work for you," said the elder brother."I'd love to stay on,"  the carpenter said, "but I have so many more bridges to build." 【解析】 这是一篇读后续写。阅读短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 1.速读全文,获取大意 读后续写大多为记叙文,我们可以用五个W和一个H问题来获取文章大意,即用when、where、who、what、how、why来说明“何时何地谁发生了何事,事件是如何发展的,为什么会这样发展。” 2.细读原文,理清脉络 续写是对原文的延伸,学生续写时要遵循原文的思路、风格和语言;要做到故事情节烂熟于心,人物性格准确把握。为此,学生有必要细读原文,了解原文的风格,用笔划出原文主要情节,次要情节,矛盾的冲突点、高潮处或可续写点,从而理清原文脉络。同时也应关注原文好词好句,细节描写和有效对话。 3.分析逻辑,构思情节 读后续写可以从两方面构思情节。一是分析文章结尾和两个段落首句间的逻辑关系,根据五所思维,即“所见,所闻,所想,所感,所做”,运用问题链设置相关问题构思情节。 二是搭建中文支架构思情节。合理且有创意的结尾能让阅卷老师回味无穷。 4.细节描写,优化语言 学生续写时应运用朴实、地道、恰当的词语,不必追求高大上的生僻词汇。续写情节应是原文的延续。续写手法叙述为主,描写为辅。当然,如学生能适时添加动作描写,肖像描写,环境描写,修辞表达和花样表达情节等细节描写,便能优化语言表达,让故事情节充满画面感。 5.检查修改,誊写终稿 完成续写初稿后,学生要检查、修改、润色自己的作文。自查情节是否合理,结尾是否有创意;语法、词汇、人称、时态运用是否准确;是否使用五个关键词;是否有细节描写和品质词句。最后用工整、端正的字迹誊写语篇续写,吸引阅卷教师的眼球。
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