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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last winter vacationI went to Hainan with my parents on air. We first went to the beach. The sky was clearlythe sea was blue and the beach was very beautiful. What was impressed me most was diving. I saw so much colorful tropical fishes. It was so amazing. Then we pay a visit to the Ends of the Earthwhich I had dreamed of go to. We appreciated the beautiful scenery all the way and took many photo. During the visitI tasted various delicious local foodsamong that I liked sea food most. The people there were friendly and smiling faces were around us all the waywhich made us exciting.

We had a wonderful time there and it was unforgettable journey. I look forward to travelling there again.

 

on→by clearly→clear 去掉was much→many pay→paid go→going photo→photos that→which exciting→excited unforgettable前面加上an 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文,作者讲述了去年寒假和家人一起去海南游玩的经历。 第一处:考查介词。第一句的句意为“去年寒假,我和我的父母坐飞机去了海南”。on air 意为“正在广播”, 不符合句意,by air 意为“坐飞机”符合句意。故将on改成by。 第二处:考查形容词。句意:天空是清澈的,海是蓝的,海滩非常漂亮。分析句子可知这里要用一个形容词来形容the sky, clearly为副词意为“清楚地; 清晰地”在这里用法错误,故将clearly改成clear。 第三处:考查动词语态。分析句子可知What was impressed me most为主语从句,what在从句中做主语,与impress之间是主谓关系,要用主动语态,所以was是多余的,所以将was去掉。 第四处:考查形容词。many与much都可以表示“许多的”,many 修饰可数名词,much修饰不可数名词。fishes为可数名词,应该由many修饰,故将much改成many。 第五处:考查时态。根据went,was, saw等可以判断全文时态为一般过去时,而这里的pay为一般现在时不符合全文时态,故将pay改成paid。 第六处:考查固定搭配。dream of doing 为固定搭配,意为 “梦想做……”, of后面要用动词的现在分词形式,这里的go是错误的,故将go改成going。 第七处:考查名词单复数。photo为可数名词,且由many修饰,说明这里要用其复数形式,故将photo改成photos。 第八处:考查非限定性定语从句。分析可知among that I liked sea food most为非限定性定语从句, that不能引导非限定性定语从句,所以that错误。分析可知先行词为local foods,指物,引导词在从句中做介词among的宾语,所以要用which引导这个非限定性定语从句。故将that改成which。 第九处:考查形容词。exciting意为“令人兴奋的”,用于指某件事令人兴奋的。这里要表达的是“让我们很激动”,是用来形容人的感受,应该用excited (感到兴奋的),故将exciting改成excited。 第十处:考查冠词。journey是可数名词,根据句意这里要表示的是“一次难忘的旅行”, 所以要加不定冠词。unforgettable为元音开头, 所以要用an。故在unforgettable前面加上an。
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C. Focusing on a topic.    D. Making business deals.

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C. To fight against the enemies.    D. To defend their top female.

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