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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I am interested at swimming very much. At first, I went swimming just to keep health. Now my dream was to swim for my country in the Olympics. Though practicing in the pool is very bored, but I still work very hard in order to realize my dream. Because my hard work, I have already come first in much important competitions. In the competitions, I’ve made lot of friends and we’re very close. It’s much easier to have friends which are swimmers because they also have to get up early to practice like you and they understand this kind of life.

 

1. ... am interested at ...     at → in       2. ... to keep health.             health → healthy 3. ... was to             was → is             4. ... is very bored ...             bored → boring     5. ... but I still work ...          去掉but 6. Because my hard work ...   my前加of     7. ... in much important ...         much → many 8. ... lot of friends ...           lot → lots或lot前加a 9. ... friends which are ...       which → who /that       10. ... practise like you ...         you → me 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了作者非常喜欢游泳,游泳给他带了很多好处。 第一处:考查固定短语。对…感兴趣be interested in,故将at改为in。 第二处:考查固定短语。最初,起先at first,冠词the是多余的,故将the去掉。 第三处:考查形容词。句意:起初,我去游泳只是为了保持健康。keep+形容词表示“保持某种状态”,keep healthy保持健康,故将health改为healthy。 第四处:考查时态。句意:现在,我的梦想是在奥运会上为我的国家而游泳。根据句意,应用一般现在时,故将was改为is。 第五处:考查形容词。句意:虽然在游泳池里练习很无聊。bore有两种形容词形式,bored无聊的,无趣的,常指人的情绪;boring令人无聊的,常形容事物,此处指游泳无聊,故将bored改为boring。 第六处:考查介词短语。此处需要区别because和because of,because是连词,连接前后两个句子,because of是介词短语,后跟短语,my hard work是短语,故在because后加of。 第七处:考查形容词。much修饰不可数名词而competition是可数名词且用的是其复数形式,many可以修饰可数名词复数,故将much改为many。 第八处:考查固定用法。“很多”可以用a lot of 表达,也可以用lots of ,故将lot改为lots或lot前加a。 第九处:考查定语从句。句意:和游泳的人交朋友变得更容易了。此处是一个定语从句,先行词swimmer指人,故将which改为who/that。 第十处:考查代词。根据上下文语境,此处指他们也像我一样早起练习游泳,故将you改为me。  
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