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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As it is known to all, the Great Wall is the most famous places of interest in China. Everybody wants to go there, but I am no exception. Then, this summer vacation, the day I have been looking forward to coming at last. I got up very early that day and set off with my brother Tim followed behind. After two hours’ bus ride, we arrived at which looked like the large market, where there were millions of people talking, pushing and photographing. At that, my enthusiasm immediate disappeared. Indeed, the Great Wall is really something must be experienced with a little ease and privacy.

 

1.去掉it;2.places→place;3.but→and;4.have→had;5.coming→came6.followed→following;7.which→what;8.the→a;9.immediate→immediately;10.something后加that。 【解析】 本文是一篇记叙文。文章叙述了“我”和Tim在暑假一起去长城参观游玩的经历。 1. 考查as引导的非限制性定语从句。as引导定语从句,并在从句中作主语,因此it是多余的,as is known to all意为“众所周知”。故将it去掉。 2. 考查名词。句子主语是the Great Wall ,应使用单数名词指代它。故将places改为place。 3. 考查连词。but前后的两个简单句的语意关系是并列关系,故将but改为and。 4. 考查时态。句意:我一直盼望的那一天终于来了。这一天来临已经是过去,“一直盼望”发生在“来”之前,即过去的过去,因此应使用过去完成进行时。故将have改为had。 5. 考查时态。分析句子结构可知,come是主句的谓语动词,这一天已经到了,应使用一般过去时。故将coming改为came。 6. 考查with的复合结构。在这个结构中,follow是Tom发出的动作,它们之间是主动关系,因此使用现在分词作宾语补足语。故将followed改为following。 7. 考查名词性从句。which意为“哪一个,哪些”,不合乎语意。what意为“……地方”,在at后面引导宾语从句,并在从句中作主语。故将which改为what。 8. 考查冠词。此处意为“一个看起来像是市场的地方”。因为是首次提到,而且不是特指。故将the改为a。 9. 考查副词。修饰动词disappeared需要使用副词作状语,故将immediate改为immediately。 10. 考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知,something是定语从句的先行词,从句缺主语,因此使用关系代词that,并且不能省略。故在something后加that。  
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TENCENT announced yesterday that it will limit the daily time for youngsters to play 1. (it) popular King of Glory game after parents and schools in Shanghai and other areas complained their children had become addicted to playing it.

From tomorrow,children younger than 12 2. (allow) only to play the game for a maximum of one hour a day, and after 9pm,they will be banned 3. logging (登录) into it, said Tencent. Teenagers older than 12 will be able to play a maximum two hours a day.

The game system will remind players the time they have been playing and young players will be forced to log out 4. the time is up.

Tencent claimed these were the 5. (strict) measures in China’s game industry to prevent 6. (addict) and the company expected they would ease parents’ anxiety.

There have been several cases 7. ( report) that children had spent too much money as well as time on King of Glory, Tencent said it will add 8. new function to limit spending of teenage players. The company also said it had updated system for parents to monitor children 9. (use) its games.

Now, parents can connect phones, tablets or computers their children use 10. (play ) games, so that they can always keep an eye on the children even if they have several game accounts, Tencent said.

 

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    Last Sunday, there was no dirt in the air, only bright spring sunshine and a clear blue sky. After church, Papa headed out to the field to check on the cattle while Mama started dinner. Faye and I played in the yard. The temperature suddenly dropped—it felt good. The ________ had been building since dawn.

Then Mama shouted from the ________, “Irisyou and Faye get insidereal quick now!”

I looked to the west and saw a huge black cloud of ________, like thick smoke from a railway engine’s chimney. All the birds flew away. “Fayego with Mama!” I ________. “I’ll warn Papa.”

Faye ran toward the house. The storm hit so fast that I ________ saw her climb the porch (门廊) steps. In a short time, the day turned into night. I ________ for Papa, hoping my voice would lead him back.

The dirt and sand stung my face like a thousand bees. I needed to get to shelter. ________ my face with one hand, I made my way toward the car and opened the door. Dirt flew in with me as I pulled the door closed. Papa was still out there! I needed to help him ________ the car.

I searched the dashboard (仪表板) and found the switch for the front ________. They made some rays, but would Papa see them in the thick ________? I pushed the horn (喇叭) again and again, hoping Papa would hear it.

________, Papa’s face appeared at the window. My heart jumped with surprise and ________. He opened the door and climbed onto the seat next to me. He coughed and wiped his eyes with dirty handsthen pulled me into his arms. “Oh, Iris, you’re ________.”

I hugged Papa and ________. I could feel the tears streaming down my dirty cheeks. Papa ________ my face. “Your mother and Faye?” I said, “They are in the house.” Papa nodded, “Good. We’ll wait out the storm there.” Papa shut off the car’s lights and I worried the dirt would ________ us.

Finally, the wind died down and the dust started to ________. Papa kicked against the door, opening it far enough to let us out. We went home as Mama ________ out. “Mama!” I shouted and ran into her arms. “Ohmy precious Iris!” Mama cried. “You and Papa are safe!”

“I’m safe ________ Iris,” Papa said. “The car’s horn led me to shelter.”

“I’m so proud of you,” Mama said to me.

I cried even more then, tears of joy because our family had ________ the horrible storm.

1.A.sand B.thunder C.heat D.snow

2.A.church B.house C.field D.car

3.A.fog B.gas C.steam D.dust

4.A.said B.complained C.suggested D.shouted

5.A.hardly B.constantly C.really D.surprisingly

6.A.screamed B.waited C.looked D.searched

7.A.Cleaning B.Touching C.Covering D.Rubbing

8.A.fix B.find C.recognize D.drive

9.A.lights B.handles C.wheels D.windows

10.A.smoke B.darkness C.forest D.atmosphere

11.A.Curiously B.Disappointedly C.Suddenly D.Unexpectedly

12.A.relief B.warmth C.excitement D.bravery

13.A.handsome B.cautious C.safe D.impressive

14.A.smiled B.whispered C.relaxed D.cried

15.A.glared at B.looked into C.swept over D.reached for

16.A.bury B.leave C.hurt D.poison

17.A.spread B.multiply C.settle D.double

18.A.walked B.slipped C.laughed D.dashed

19.A.rather than B.apart from C.thanks to D.other than

20.A.survived B.defeated C.experienced D.caused

 

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BE A GOOD TOURIST

Tourism can be both good and bad. Yes, it brings in money for the local economy and creates lots of jobs for locals, but it may also bring some problems.

1. Tourists have used paint, rocks, or even keys to write on the Luxor Temple in Egypt, the Colosseum in Rome, Stonehenge in the UK, memorial stones at the bottom of Qomolangma, and many, many other places. Thousands of tourists sites are being destroyed by tourists who “love them to death”. 2. If you want to leave a mark on the world, do it by changing someone’s life with kindness and love. Pass kindness along to future generations, not destruction.

Another big problem in some places has been tourists disturbing the local people and life. 3. For example, Chiang Mai University in Thailand and Yonsei University in South Korea have great numbers of tourists visiting their campuses and walking through their libraries and other public areas, taking pictures of students and disturbing their studies. I have three words for tourists like this: please be considerate. 4.

The number of problems from tourists is endless: walking in large groups without considering others who need to walk by, crossing roads without observing local traffic laws, and many more. The only way to solve the issue of the terrible tourist is to make sure that you are not one! 5. Remember, whenever you step outside your country’s borders, you are representing your country to the rest of the world.

A. Just think from other aspects.

B. When in Rome, do as the Romans do.

C. Have fun in a way that does not disturb others.

D. Be the best, kindest, most polite tourist possible.

E. I have three words for people like this: please stop it.

F. One growing problem is tourists who want to prove that they have visited someplace.

G. Some tourists wander around and take pictures of local people without asking for their permission.

 

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    I arrived in my Chinese classroom, ready to share my vast knowledge and experience with the 75 students who would be my English Literature class. Having taught in the USA for 17 years, I had no worry at all about my ability to plant in my students enthusiasm for the literature of my mother tongue.

I was really shocked when the monitor shouted “Stand up” and the entire class rose as I entered the room, and I was somewhat confused and anxious about how to get them to sit down again, but once that embarrassment was over, I quickly calmed down and launched into what I thought was a fact-packed lecture, sure to gain their respect-perhaps even their admiration. I went back to my room radiating that rosy glow (光泽) that comes from a sense of significant accomplishment.

My students kept journals, however, and as I read them, the rosy glow was gradually replaced by an overwhelming sense of frustration. The first journal said, “Our literature teacher didn’t teach us anything today. Perhaps her next lecture will be better.” Heartbroken, I read journal after journal, each expressing a similar theme. Didn’t teach them anything? I sketched the entire philosophical framework of thought AND laid the historical background for all the works we’ll study in class.” I complained, “How can they say I didn't teach them anything?”

Determined to clear myself, I dug out all my reference books, adding background material to my next lecture, researching into the sociological setting and even the psychological state of the author. After the second class, I eagerly opened the journals, expecting enthusiastic reviews at last. Again, I was crushed by their continuing comments that I was going too slowly without giving meaningful details.

More determined than ever. I dived into sources of criticism, deciding to devote more time to the texts by providing summaries of all the interpretations I could find of each work. This material would give my students ample information for drawing their own conclusions about the work’s meaning, “Our teacher seems confused about the real meaning of the works,” the journals said. “One minute she gives one interpretation; the next minute she gives another. Then she asks for our opinions. We’re the students. She’s the teacher. She should tell us what the works mean.”

It was a long semester, and it gradually became clear to me that my ideas about education were purely Western, and that Chinese ideas differed significantly. I thought a teacher’s job was to raise interesting questions and provide enough background so that students could draw their own conclusions. My students thought a teacher’s job was to provide accurate information as directly and concisely as possible. Americans wanted to interpret and experience. The Chinese wanted to master and memorize.

1.How did the writer feel before he began his teaching in China?

A.Worried. B.Confident.

C.Disappointed. D.Confused.

2.What might be the reason why the writer was shocked when the monitor shouted “Stand up”?

A.The students intended to scare their new foreign leacher.

B.The students refused to stand up before their new foreign teacher.

C.The writer was a little shy and felt embarrassed when he entered the classroom.

D.The writer didn’t know much about the Chinese classroom and that was totally unexpected.

3.What does the writer mean by saying “determined to clear myself” in Para. 4?

A.He wanted to better understand the students’question.

B.He wanted to prove his ability in teaching the course.

C.He was a little bit angry with the students.

D.He was very disappointed with himself.

4.Which of the following might the writer agree with?

A.Chinese and Western ideas about education are slightly different.

B.A teacher’s job is to make students think and have their own opinions.

C.Teaching is to provide accurate information directly and clearly.

D.Both Americans and the Chinese tend to draw conclusions by themselves.

 

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    Lego is considering a brick (积木) rental plan in an attempt to cut down on plastic waste. The Danish toymaker has promised to make all its bricks from sustainable (可持续的) sources by 2030 and is investing significant resources into finding alternatives.

Tim Brooks, vice-president responsible for sustainability, said the company was “totally open” to the idea of a product rental plan but admitted that lost pieces could produce a significant problem. “What are the chances of giving them to an eight-year-old child and getting them all back again?” Mr. Brooks added.

“There is a lot of technical thinking that needs to be done. We are right at beginning of that.” Mr. Brooks said Lego was exploring several ideas with a view to producing the highest value from products while consuming the least amount of resources. He said many would “probably never see the light of day” and there was no current plan to try out a rental plan.

Lego has come under increasing pressure to reduce its carbon footprint among growing international alarm about the impact of plastic waste on the environment. It produces 19 billion pieces per year—36, 000 a minute—that are made entirely of plastic while much of the inside packaging is also plastic.

So far, the only breakthrough has been the development of a line of bricks made from plant-based plastic sourced from sugarcane. The green trees, plants and flowers were first included in Lego sets late last year but make up only 1%-2% of the total amount of plastic elements produced. Henrik Nielson, a production supervisor (主管) in Lego’s factory, said last year: “We need to learn again how to do this.”

Lego reportedly releases around a million tons of carbon dioxide each year, with about 75% coming from raw materials that go into factories. The company has invested more than 100, 000,000 euros and hired 100 people to research non-plastic alternatives. It is aiming to keep all of its packaging out of landfill by 2025.

1.Lego is making great efforts to ________.

A.promote its brick rental plan B.raise its production efficiency

C.explore ways to reduce plastic waste D.develop new products

2.According to Mr. Brooks, Lego’s brick rental plan ________.

A.is well under way B.has a long way to go

C.is totally useless D.goes against Lego’s interest

3.The writer tells of Lego’s stress of reducing plastic waste by means of ________.

A.figures B.examples

C.comparison D.classification

4.What is Lego’s attitude towards developing non-plastic alternatives?

A.Defensive. B.Determined.

C.Disapproving. D.Doubtful.

 

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