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假定英语课上老师要求同桌修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错 误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。

As more and more people choose bike-riding instead of drive, bike-sharing enjoys great popularity in China. It’s very convenient of you to use a mobike if you have a mobile phone. You just need to find the nearest mobike through the APP, scan the QR code on the bike, but enjoy your trip. Compared with other form of shared bikes, a mobike have many advantages. One obvious advantage is that you can find a mobike easy and never worry about where to park them. In word, bike-sharing benefits people a lot. It has become a new way of transportation, that reduces traffic jams and helps protect the environment as well as.

 

1.drive→driving 2.of→for 3.but→and 4.form→forms 5.have→has 6.easy→easily 7. them→it 8. 在word前面加a 9. that→which 10. 去掉最后一个as 【解析】 这是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了共享单车的优点:使用方便而且还、减轻交通压力和环保。 第一处:考查非谓语动词。句意:随着越来越多的人选择骑自行车而不是开车。instead of“代替”是介词词组,此处应使用动名词。故drive改为driving。 第二处:考查介词。句意:如果你有手机,使用摩拜单车很方便。当介词前面形容词与人的性格品质有关时,使用介词of,除此之外都用for,convenient意为“方便的”与人的性格品质没有关系,故of改为for。 第三处:考查连词。句意:你只需要通过APP找到最近的摩拜单车,扫描自行车上的二维码,便享受你的旅程。这里enjoy your trip“享受你的旅程”与前面句子没有转折关系,是并列关系,故but改为and。 第四处:考查名词。句意:与其他形式的共享单车相比,摩拜单车有很多优势。这里指其他许多共享单车形式,可知应使用复数形式,故form改为forms。 第五处:考查主谓一致。句意:与其他形式的共享单车相比,摩拜单车有很多优势。主语a mobike是单数,谓语动词也用单数形式,句子描述的是客观事实,应使用一般现在时。故have改为has。 第六处:考查副词。句意:一个明显的优势是,你可以很容易地找到一个摩拜单车,从来不担心在哪里停车。修饰动词find“找到”,应用副词形式,故easy改为easily。 第七处:考查代词。句意:一个明显的优势是,你可以很容易地找到一个摩拜单车,从来不担心在哪里停车。句子里出现a mobike是单数,此处指代前面说的那台共享单车,应用单数,故them应改为it。 第八处:考查冠词。句意:总之,共享单车让人们受益匪浅。in a word“总之”是固定用法,故在word前加a。 第九处:考查定语从句。句意:共享单车已成为一种新的交通方式,减少了交通堵塞,并有助于保护环境。此处是非限制性定语从句,关系词在从句中做主语,先行词是a new way of transportation,应使用关系代词which引导,故that改为which。 第十处:考查副词。句意:共享单车已成为一种新的交通方式,减少了交通堵塞,并有助于保护环境。as well as“既……又……”常用来连接两个并列的成分,as well =too也用在句末,故去掉最后的as。  
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