短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(
)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Two men were traveling together while a bear suddenly met them. One of them climbed up into the tree. The other, seeing that he must be attacked, immediate lay on his back on the ground. When the bear came up, feeling him with his nose and smelt him all over, he held breath. The bear soon left him, for it’s said that a bear won’t touches a dead body. When he was gone, the other travelers went down from the tree. And he asked his friend that the bear had whispered to his ear. “He gave me a piece of advice,” his companion replied. “Never to travel with a friend who deserts you in the face of danger.”
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阅读下面材料,在空白处填入一个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
It's almost a common belief that the best food you can find in a place is not in the fancy restaurants,1.in the backstreets. These spots are usuallyaway from popular tourist attractions, which means that to find them you'll need the spirit of an explorer.
That's2.I came across roujiamo when I was exploring Beijing. I found3.restaurant that sold dishes from Xi'an when I explored the area around4.(I) office one day. I decided to try it tout.
My roujiamo5.(make) fresh, so the bread was still warm. It was soft when I6.bite) into it, and the meat inside was delicious and tender. In fact，I enjoyed it so much that I ordered more to take home with me. Though it's just a snack，it's still quite filling and can7.(easy) satisfy your appetite.
There are a variety of things you can put inside the "mo"，as the bread is called. For example，in certain areas in Xi'an，the meat8.(use) is usually beef, but in Gansu Province，lamb is more common. And the first roujiamo that I tried was made9.chicken. However it's made, it's still a tasty snack. And for an American like me who grew up10.(eat) hamburgers, it's a perfect combination of East and West.
Have you ever seen a movie in which a building was burned down or a bridge was destroyed? Have you seen films in which two trains crashed or a ship____into the ocean? If____, you may have wondered how these things could happen without____the actors and actresses in the film.
The man who knows the____is the “special-effects” man. He has one of the most important____in the film industry. He may be ordered to____a flood or to make a battlefield explode. But he may also be told to create a____effect which is much less exciting,____just as important to the success of the film.
In a____for one movie there was a big glass bowl filled with water in which small fish were swimming. The director of the movie____the fish to stop swimming suddenly____they seemed to stare at (盯着看) an actor. Then the director wanted the fish to____staring and swim. But fish can’t be ordered to do anything. It was quite a____
The special-effects man thought about the problem for a long time. The result was an idea for____the fish with a harmless use of electricity____he applied electricity to the fish bowl causing the fish to be absolutely____Then he rapidly reduced the amount of____, allowing the fish to be free. Thus he got the humourous effect the____wanted.
In other parts of movie making there are also special-effects men who have developed____skills in creating certain kinds of effects. Jim White, who has been a special- effects man for thirty-two years, is best known for his____with ships and airplanes.
1.A.buried B.sank C.fell D.dropped
2.A.so B.such C.possible D.necessary
3.A.telling B.harming C.protecting D.organizing
4.A.news B.question C.message D.secret
5.A.films B.jobs C.factories D.companies
6.A.prevent B.fight C.pour D.create
7.A.terrible B.peaceful C.funny D.special
8.A.or B.as C.though D.only
9.A.scene B.step C.stage D.room
10.A.ordered B.wanted C.decided D.doubted
11.A.while B.since C.so that D.even if
12.A.return B.continue C.stop D.start
13.A.success B.failure C.problem D.disappointment
14.A.controlling B.operating C.driving D.lighting
15.A.As a result B.Above all C.First D.Immediately
16.A.pure B.interesting C.still D.quiet
17.A.fish B.water C.electricity D.bowl
18.A.actor B.actress C.director D.special-effects man
19.A.fast B.particular C.humorous D.careful
20.A.imagination B.work C.repair D.design
Americans use many expressions with the word “dog”. People in the United States love their dogs and treat them well. 1.However, dogs without owners to care for them lead a different kind of life. The expression, to lead a dog's life, describes a person who has an unhappy existence.
Some people say we live in a dog-eat-dog world. 2.They say that to be successful, a person has to work like a dog. This means they have to work very, very hard. Such hard work can make people dog-tired. And, the situation would be even worse if they became sick as a dog.
3.This means that every person enjoys a successful period during his or her life. To be successful, people often have to learn new skills. Yet, some people say that you can never teach an old dog new tricks. They believe that older people do not like to learn new things and will not change the way they do things.
4.People who are unkind or uncaring can be described as meaner than a junkyard dog. Junkyard dogs live in places where people throw away things they do not want. Mean dogs are often used to guard this property. They bark or attack people who try to enter the property. However, sometimes a person who appears to be mean and threatening is really not so bad. We say his bark is worse than his bite.
Dog expressions are also used to describe the weather. The dog days of summer are the hottest days of the year. A rainstorm may cool the weather. But we do not want it to rain too hard.5.
A. Some people are compared to dogs in bad ways.
B. Dogs are people’s loyal friends all the time.
C. Still, people say every dog has its day.
D. They take their dogs for walks, let them play outside and give them nice meals.
E. That means many people are competing for the same things, like good jobs.
F. Sometimes, morning rain can light up the day.
G. We do not want it to rain cats and dogs.
If a stranger offered you money to keep a suitcase in your spare room，would you accept? How about the other way round：if you had too many belongings，would you consider trusting someone you met online with their safekeeping? Anthony Paine believed enough of us would answer “yes” to these questions to launch his own startup (新兴公司)，Stashbee．His business links people with space to those who need it．
And it's just one player in the booming “sharing economy”，an industry that relies on people renting out things like their beds，bikes and even parking spaces．Airbnb，a company valued at 200bn RMB，provides a platform for those renting property short-term．DogVacay pairs holidaymaking pet owners with pet-friendly hosts，and aims to be profitable by 2017．
All their business models revolve around one simple word：trust．So，how does Stashbee measure up? BBC journalist Dougal Shaw decided to try it out for himself．He had some odds and ends to store while renovating his house，and met a host through the site who could keep them for 475 RMB for two months．All relatively smooth and painless．
Heavyweights (行业巨头) in the traditional storage industry，such as Big Yenow and Access，aren’t convinced．A representative from Access told Shaw he was skeptical about storing with “amateurs”．He considered 24／7(全天候) access to the items and better security as the main advantages of his service.
Stashbee agree that dealing with security concerns is important，but say business success depends more on people overcoming a distrust of strangers we’ve been taught since childhood. They aren’t alone．Companies such as Costockage，Roost and Spacer all run similar storage businesses，and are all relying on a shift in consumer attitudes．
And the concept of social storage doesn’t stop there．CityStasher believe there’s a gap in the market for those who want to store things for extremely short periods of time．
Would you try it out? It’s a question of trust．
1.The author put forward two questions at the beginning of the text to__________.
A.expect readers to answer them
B.carry out a survey among readers
C.start a conversation among readers
D.draw readers attention to the topic
2.How does Dougal Shaw try out Stashbee’s business?
A.Experiencing in person． B.Doing a survey online．
C.Analyzing some data． D.Exchanging his belongings.
3.What does the traditional storage industry value most?
A.Trust． B.Security．
C.Cost． D.Professional knowledge．
“ Hi , Mrs Grady ,” said Mark when their neighbor opened her door, “ Would you like us to shovel your sidewalk and driveway ?” Shoveling was Jamie’s idea, a way to earn enough money for the new Ocean Kingdom video game that came out the next day.
Mrs. Grady was happy, “ That would be wonderful , boys. I think the job is getting to be too much for me.”
“It will cost 10 dollars,” Jamie said,“ If that’s OK”, Mark added.
“Oh dear,”Mrs. Grady said disappointedly, “ I haven’t been able to get to the bank. I can offer homemade cookies, but I realize that’s not what you had in mind.”
Mark was going to say that Mrs. Grady could pay them another time, but Jamie cut him off ,“ We’ll come back later.”
Mrs. Grady doesn’t look like the person who’d come to his rescue last summer when Mr. Dunn’s collie , Goldie had just wanted to play , but Mark didn’t feel comfortable around big dogs . He wanted to call for help , but his tongue seemed locked behind his teeth. Then Mrs. Grady’s front door had flown open. She must have seen him from across the street. “ Hold on , Mark . I’m coming!” “Goldie” she’d called. As soon as Goldie had turned her head, Mrs. Grady had slipped between Mark and the dog. She wasn’t much taller than Mark, but she’d stood firm as a rock in front of him.“Goldie, go home!” Then she’d swept her broom to hurry the dog along.”“ Get!” Goldie had obeyed.
When Mark showed thanks to Mrs.Grady, Mrs. Grady laughed“It was nothing. Good neighbors watch out for each other, don’t they? ”
And now Mrs. Grady needed Mark as much as he’d needed her last summer. He smiled and waved at Mrs. Grady, then his shovel deep into the snow.
“ Hey!” Jamie shouted, “What are you doing? ” Mark couldn’t explain about Goldie and watching out for neighbors. “I like Mrs. Grady’s cookies.” he said.
1.Why did Jamie and Mark plan to clear the snow for Mrs. Grany at first?
A.To help the lady B.To earn pocket money
C.To do volunteer work D.To visit New Kingdom
2.Mrs . Grady couldn’t pay them most probably because ________.
A.she didn’t have enough cash B.she couldn’t find the bank
C.she thought it was worthless D.she couldn’t afford it
3.Which of the following proverb can best summarize the story?
A.A penny saved is a penny earned B.Kindness is repaid with kindness
C.A clear conscience D.Actions speak louder than work
