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Zhou Yan is the Senior Three student. Last week, he goes to see a doctor because of his arms and fingers hurt. The doctor told him the fact that had a “mobile phone disease”. Zhou sent messages for his friends with his mobile phone all the time, even in bed. Zhou started to do badly in all the exam because he spent so many time on his mobile phone. He didn’t stop use the mobile phone until his arms hurt. Yang Ling, which is an expert from a health center, said students should try to use their mobile phones less, especial at school.
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Tea is one of the 1. (much) popular drinks in the world. You make it by pouring hot water over the dried leaves of a tea plant. For 2. (hundred) of years people believed that tea could cure illnesses, and they used 3. as medicine. Today scientists know that tea contains chemicals that prevent cells from dying. Most teas have caffeine in them, 4. makes you feel more active. Some people have problems 5. (drink) tea because it can cause sleeplessness.
The tea plant 6. (grow) best in tropical and temperate places where rain falls throughout the year. Teas can be grown from sea level 7. about 2,000 metres, but the best quality grows in higher regions.
Tea comes from the leaves and buds of tea plants. Wild plants can be up to 9 metres high, however, on tea plantations, 8. (pull) the leaves 9. (easy), people cut them back to a bush of about a metre in height. It takes a plant three to five years before it is ready for picking.
A picker can harvest about 20 kg of tea a day. On large tea plantations the leaves are harvested by machines, but the quality of tea is 10.(high) when the leaves are picked by hand.
阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
The snow is gone and green grass can be seen growing close to the sunny side of homes. The birds in the back yard are singing in the bush. Spring is here, and with_______come memories of the smell of_______, new sneakers, and longer days.
As a kid, I knew spring arrived when I walked into the house after school and_______paint. The first warm day would cause my mum to have the idea of_______She opened the windows, let the fresh air in, opened a can of paint, and put a fresh_______on the walls of a room.
Spring was also the time to change_______In Nova Scotia, we had snow on the ground almost_______from late December until late March. We spent all of our time outside wearing our_______winter boots. To run in them was like running with two weighty bags.
In late April or early May, mum would take us to the town to buy a new pair of light_______for each of us. I still remember the rubber________, with the trademark imprinted on it. After a month or two, small hands would tear it off, and leave a circle, darker than the________material around it.
Later, when we returned home, my brothers and I________our new sneakers. The door shut________behind us when we rushed out, causing a shout of________from our dad. Then we ran across the fields. The weight of the heavy winter boots was________It felt like we were________through the air or we could jump thirty feet like a kangaroo. The thoughts of summer’s approach and the________wind of spring rushing past our uncovered ears were________
When life gets me down; when everything seems________; I don’t let it________me. I would let my room put on a new coat of paint, pull on a new pair of sneakers, and just run like it was spring.
1.A.autumn B.spring C.winter D.summer
2.A.flowers B.food C.wine D.paint
3.A.smelled B.bought C.made D.matched
4.A.adventure B.communication C.decoration D.happiness
5.A.coat B.jacket C.sweater D.shirt
6.A.socks B.caps C.gloves D.shoes
7.A.especially B.normally C.continuously D.commonly
8.A.new B.heavy C.light D.soft
9.A.pants B.trousers C.sneakers D.glasses
10.A.circle B.rabbit C.line D.star
11.A.ugly B.colorful C.new D.faded
12.A.tore down B.put on C.made up D.turned down
13.A.heavily B.slightly C.gently D.slowly
14.A.excitement B.joy C.surprise D.anger
15.A.increasing B.coming C.gone D.measured
16.A.running B.flying C.walking D.riding
17.A.warm B.cold C.biting D.strong
18.A.terrible B.negative C.delightful D.fearful
19.A.successful B.hopeless C.satisfying D.hopeful
20.A.cheat B.change C.win D.affect
When I was about 12, I had an enemy, a girl who liked to point out my shortcomings. Week by week her list ______: I was very thin; I wasn’t a ______ student; I talked too much; I was too _____, always feeling superior to（胜过）others, and so on. I tried to hear all this as long as I could. _____, I became very angry. I ran to my father with _____ in my eyes.
He listened to me ______, and then he asked. “Are the things she says true or not? Janet, didn’t you ever wonder _____ you’re really like? Well, you now have that girl’s ______. Go and ____ a list of everything she said and mark the points that are ______. Pay no attention to the other things she said.”
I did ______ he told me. To my great _____, I discovered that about half the things were true. Some of them I couldn’t ______ (like being very thin), but a good number I could – and suddenly I wanted to change. For the first time I went to a fairly ______ picture of myself.
I brought the list back to Daddy. He ______ to take it. “That’s just for you,” he said. “You know _____ than anyone else the truth about yourself. But you have to learn to ______, not just close your ears in anger, feeling _____ when something said about you is true, you’ll find it of help to you. Our world is full of people who think they know your affairs. Don’t shut your ______. Listen to them all, but hear the truth and do what you know is the right thing to do.”
Daddy’s advice has always ______ to me at many important moments. In my life, I’ve never had a better piece of advice.
1.A.collected B.added C.grew D.continued
2.A.good B.bad C.short D.greedy
3.A.silly B.friendly C.dull D.proud
4.A.In other words B.Above all C.As a result D.At last
5.A.tears B.happiness C.promises D.wishes
6.A.coldly B.quietly C.eagerly D.happily
7.A.who B.how C.what D.that
8.A.excuse B.opinion C.talk D.advice
9.A.take B.make C.create D.receive
10.A.wrong B.correct C.big D.true
11.A.as B.so C.before D.till
12.A.joy B.pleasure C.surprise D.anger
13.A.say B.like C.do D.change
14.A.wonderful B.clear C.interesting D.beautiful
15.A.promised B.refused C.expected D.agreed
16.A.wider B.higher C.better D.worse
17.A.listen B.stand C.speak D.share
18.A.hurt B.sad C.shy D.excited
19.A.words B.mouths C.eyes D.ears
20.A.returned B.gone C.appeared D.happened
Are you happy with your appearance? 1.
“Almost all the girls with single-fold eyelids in our class have had double-eyelid operations,” Zeng, a Senior 2 student from Chengdu, told Xinhua. Zeng had the same surgery done this summer. 2.
From popular photo-editing apps to plastic surgery, it seems that large eyes, pale skin and a skinny body are the only standard for beauty these days. But can following this standard really make us feel good about ourselves?
3. According to Huxiu News, over six in ten girls choose not to take part in certain daily activities, such as attending school, because they feel bad about their looks. As much as 31 percent of teenagers avoid speaking up in class because they worry that others will notice their looks.
Many teenagers are upset about their appearance because they believe in unrealistic standards of beauty, experts say. 4. Seeing all these things can make anyone believe that they’re too dark, too fat, too short, or too tall.
However, trying to live up to strict standards can make us feel anxious. What troubles us is not just our “imperfect” looks, but the fact that we criticize ourselves too much.
5. Plus-size models are being featured in some fashion shows. All of us should be just as confident as they are.
A. Beauty comes in all shapes and sizes．
B. Body image anxiety is common among teenagers．
C. Guys care just as much as girls do about their body image．
D. Some teenagers might feel negatively about their appearance．
E. She and many of her classmates believe bigger eyes look more beautiful．
F. It’s not uncommon for teenagers to feel confident about their appearance．
G. Perfect faces and bodies are everywhere in advertising TV shows and social media．
People have been wondering why elephants do not develop cancer even though they have lifespans (寿命) that are similar to humans, jiving for around 50 to 70 years.
Now scientists believe they know why. A team at the University of Chicago, US has found that elephants carry a large number of genes that stop tumors (肿瘤) developing. To be precise, they found 20 copies of an anti-tumor gene called TP53 in elephants. Most other species, including humans, only carry one copy.
According to the research, the extra copies of the gene improved the animal’s sensitivity to DNA damage, which lets the cells quickly kill themselves when damaged before they can go on to form deadly tumors.
“An increased risk of developing cancer has stood in the way of the evolution of large body sizes in many animals,” the study author Dr Vincent Lynch told The Guardian. If every living cell has the same chance of becoming cancerous (癌变的), large creatures with a long lifespan like whales and elephants should have a greater risk of developing cancer than humans and mice. But across species, the risk of cancer does not show a connection with body mass.
This phenomenon was found by Oxford University scientist Richard Peto in the 1970s and later named “Peto’s paradox (悖论)”. Biologists believe it results from larger animals using protection that many smaller animals do not. In the elephant’s case, the making of TP53 is nature’s way of keeping this species alive.
The study also found that when the same genes were brought to life in mice, they had the same cancer resistance as elephants. This means researchers could use the discovery to develop new treatments that can help stop cancers spreading or even developing in the first place.
“Nature has already figured out how to prevent cancer,” said Joshua Schiffman, a biologist at the School of Medicine, University of Utah, US. “It’s up to us to learn how different animals deal with the problem so that we can use those strategies to prevent cancer in people.”
1.Why are elephants unlikely to develop cancer?
A.They have a rather large body size.
B.Their genes suffer no DNA damage.
C.Certain genes in their body kill existing tumors.
D.They carry many genes to prevent tumors developing.
2.According to the passage, what has been a risk in the evolution of large animals?
A.Deadly tumors. B.The huge body mass.
C.Cells killing themselves. D.Sensitivity to DNA damage.
3.What does the underlined part “This phenomenon” in Paragraph 5 probably refer to?
A.Larger animals have protection from TP53.
B.The risk of cancer is not related to body size.
C.Larger animals suffer the same risk of cancer as smaller ones.
D.The larger animals are, the bigger risk of cancer they will have.
4.What can be concluded from the passage?
A.Depending on nature is surely enough to fight against cancer.
B.The TP53 genes have proved useful in stopping cancer in people.
C.Humans are expected to prevent cancer with the making of TP53.
D.The extra copies of elephants, genes are used to cure cancer patients.
