Question

请根据以下提示，就旅游的好处这一话题，用英语写一篇短文．

A lot of people think that traveling is a waste of time and money． What do you think？

注意：1．无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

2．除诗歌外，文体不限；

3．词数：120左右．

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Answer

Yes， indeed， we need money and time to travel． But as I know， many of us are fond of travelling． Why？ It is because travel has numerous advantages． First of all， travel can widen our knowledge of geography， the knowledge of customs， cultures and lifestyles of different places and countries． Secondly， we can make friends and practice a foreign language through travelling． Thirdly， travel is the best way of pastime and it can make us relax． What's more， we can build ourselves up by travelling． Finally， we can enjoy eating various foods and enjoying beautiful scenery．

In a word， we can benefit from travel in more than one way． It is worth spending the time and money as long as we can afford them．

【解析】

这是一篇开放性作文。要求考生围绕旅游的好处这一话题，用英语写一篇短文

第一步：审题

体裁：开放性作文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

indeed；be fond of；numerous；advantage；widen；custom；pastime；what's more，build；various；in a word；benefit from；worth；as long as

第三步：连词成句

1. Yes， indeed， we need money and time to travel．

2. But as I know， many of us are fond of travelling．

3. It is because travel has numerous advantages．

4. First of all， travel can widen our knowledge of geography， the knowledge of customs， cultures and lifestyles of different places and countries．

5. Secondly， we can make friends and practice a foreign language through travelling．

6. Thirdly， travel is the best way of pastime and it can make us relax．

7. What's more， we can build ourselves up by travelling．

8. Finally， we can enjoy eating various foods and enjoying beautiful scenery．

9. In a word， we can benefit from travel in more than one way．

10. It is worth spending the time and money as long as we can afford them．

第四步：连句成篇

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。