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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中 共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in or out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least' part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I'm very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.

 

1.little→few 2.to pay去掉to 3.apply to→apply for 4.student→students 5.By this way→In this way 6.their fees→my fees 7.rich前加not 8.Beside→Besides 9.by teach→by teaching 10.in order to→in order that 【解析】 本文是一篇说明文,作者介绍了大学生支付学费的方式以及自己是如何支付学费的。 第一处:考查a few和a little的区别。句意:大学生有几种支付学费的方式。a little修饰不可数名词,a few修饰可数名词复数,故little改为few。 第二处:考查省略to的不定式。句意:许多学生让他们的父母支付学费。不定式在使役动词have后作宾语补足语时常省略不定式符号to,have sb do sth表示“让某人做某事”,故去掉pay前的to。 第三处:考查固定短语。句意:一些学生会申请银行贷款,而另一些学生会在校内或校外找兼职工作。apply for表示“申请”,故apply 后的to改为for。 第四处:考查可数名词复数。句意:除此之外,许多好学生可以获得奖学金。many修饰可数名词复数,故student改为students。 第五处:考查介词。句意:这样他们至少可以支付部分学费。in this way是固定短语,表示“以这种方式、这样”,故By 改为In。 第六处:考查形容词性物主代词。句意:至于我,我会让我的父母支付我一半的学费,因为他们并不富裕。根据句意可知此处表示“我的”而不是“他们的”,故.their 改为my。 第七处:考查副词。句意同上。根据句意可知我只让父母支付我一半的学费是因为他们并不富裕,故在rich前加not。 第八处:考查beside和besides的区别。句意:除了学习,我还会做兼职工作,教一些高中学生数学,物理,化学和英语,因为我很擅长这些重要的科目。beside是介词,表示“在……旁边”,besides是副词,表示“除了”,故Beside改为Besides。 第九处:考查非谓语动词。句意同上,by是介词,其后接动名词作宾语,故teach改为teaching。 第十处:考查in order to与in order that的区别。句意:当然,为了获得奖学金,我也会努力学习。in order to后接动词原形,in order that接从句,故to改为 that。  
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B.It is a convenience for work and life.

C.It may have a negative effect on creative work.

D.It clearly indicates the fast pace of modern life.

2.What did Tamar Avnet and Anne-Laure Sellier find in their experiments about clock-timers ?

A.They seize opportunities as they come up.

B.They always get their work done in time.

C.They have more control over their lives.

D.They tend to be more productive.

3.What do the researchers say about today's business culture?

A.It does not support the strategies adopted by smart companies.

B.It does not attach enough importance to task-based practice.

C.It places more emphasis on work efficiency than on workers’ lives.

D.It aims to bring employees' potential and creativity into full play.

4.What do the researchers suggest?

A.Task-based timing is preferred for doing creative work.

B.It is important to keep a balance between work and life.

C.Performing creative jobs tends to make workers happier.

D.A scientific standard should be adopted in job evaluation.

 

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