Question

假定你是李华，你的美国笔友An发来邮件说她在新学校与朋友相处方面遇到了一些问题。请你根据以下提示给她回一封邮件。1.表示理解 2.提出建议 3.表达祝愿

注意：1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）

2.可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯

Dear Ann,

I am sorry to hear that

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer

Dear Ann,

I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble in getting along with your friends in your new school.There is no need to be anxious, because many teenagers may find they’re faced with the same situation when in a new environment. The dilemma is easy to solve if you take my advice.To begin with, being a good listener is very important, as it makes the speaker feel that you are sincere. Next, try your best to communicate with your classmates more often and participate in discussions held in your class, which is an effective way to be on good terms with your friends. Furthermore, it will be a good idea to help others when necessary, for it will enable you to develop a close bond with them.

Hope that my advice will be of some help to you.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件给美国笔友An。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时

结构：总分总法

要点：1.表示理解 2.提出建议 3.表达祝愿

第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）

have trouble in；get along with；new school；teenagers；be faced with；a new environment；dilemma；a good listener；try one’s best；communicate with；participate in；an effective way；be on good terms with；a good idea；develop a close bond with；be of some help等

第三步：连词成句

1. I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble in getting along with your friends in your new school.

2. There is no need to be anxious, because many teenagers may find they’re faced with the same situation when in a new environment.

3. The dilemma is easy to solve if you take my advice.

4. Being a good listener is very important, as it makes the speaker feel that you are sincere.

5. Try your best to communicate with your classmates more often and participate in discussions held in your class, which is an effective way to be on good terms with your friends.

6. It will be a good idea to help others when necessary.

7. It will enable you to develop a close bond with them.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1. 表文章结构顺序：To begin with；Next；

2. 表并列补充关系：Furthermore

3. 表因果关系：as；because；for等

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰

第五步：润色修改